• Member Since 14th Mar, 2012
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Baron Von Clop


Dumb gay retired writer. Used to run Neighvada Nights and BronyCon panels or something.

Comments ( 30 )

Do I dare read this?

... I've read worse...

Challenge Accepted

Wow. Starts sweet as anything, too. Shy vampony Dashie, willing prey Rarity- that's some lovely stuff there.

Later?

My Little Menstruation: Dashie Does It Wrong :rainbowlaugh: no no, the blood goes the OTHER W... nevermind...

If the fetish was blood play as a sexual thing, I'm afraid I have you beat.

Still an interesting idea. Dash has spent very little time as a vampire.

Someone has to say it, might as well be me:

Still a better love story than Twilight.

Not really my thing, it started sweet with general feeding and such, but then it went a tad overboard for my tastes, that said, I don't have a blood fetish. I'm sure this is premiere wank materials for those of you that are into this kind of stuff.

1756385

1: That' was pretty much my reaction as well.

2: My Little Mens....brain bleach NOW! It did make me laugh though so thanks for that.

1756385

>My Little Menstruation
That sounds awesome, I would totally read that.:eeyup:

zero stories of vamponies? :ajbemused: clearly you didn't search right.

1756385

Ahaha. I should have used that as the title.

1757475

Read a little closer. I didn't say it's the only vampony story.

First three ponies to get 'My Little Menstruation' into the feature box need to shout out my books, which have never and will never get that kind of site support :ajsmug:

1757498 You mean blood clop? or blood play?

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Blood play, really. First story I've seen and there aren't any others according to the search feature.

Very Nice so far, loved the blood play! Keep going!

Very good job I liked the story keep up the good work

1760003 Tugging at my undead Heartstrings
Contains a fair amount of blood play mixed in with clop.

1765679

Ooooh. I will have to read this!

I'm surprised that I liked the blood play :rainbowhuh: In any case, that was a very good story :rainbowkiss: You earn a thumbs up and favorite :heart:

Meh ill bite
.>
'>.

Do you know that thing when you're getting tired and you suddenly realize you don't know how far you've read without paying any attention? It's really annoying to backtrack. Anyway, cute story, a little excessive. If I wasn't such a scaredy-cat, I'd probably enjoy the blood fetish more.

My little Menstruation
Due to the blood loss, Rarity had fallen asleep on her couch, and was only roused from dreams of fangs and crimson by a loud shriek of terror. She carefully opened her eyes, twitching slightly as she discovered her sister sitting in the door, scrambling back a little, while wearing a look of pure horror.

"Rarity!" Sweetie quickly jumped up again as she saw her sister move and stepped closer, only one bizarre detail stopping her from embracing her sister, namely the red patches covering the seamstress's fur and the floor. "You're completely covered in blood! I thought you were... you were..." Her eyes moistened as Rarity's shot open wide.

With a start, the older sister sat up, hugging the sobbing filly tightly. "It's alright. Your sister is alright, Sweetie, no need to cry." She soothingly patted the by now crimson speckled mane of her little sister.

"But why's there blood everywhere?" the little pony asked, slowly pulling back a little, but still holding onto Rarity's forelegs.

"Oh, ehm, it must've just been..." 'THINK HARDER RARITY!' "Uhm, my period. Yes, that's perfectly natural. Sometimes it's a little more, sometimes a little less." She giggled nervously. "Yes, that crazy uterus, always up for shenanigans." Her gaze slowly swept to the ceiling as she bit her lip.

By now Sweetie Belle's face had become completely pale—though it wasn't noticeable at all under her alabaster coat. She just fled from her sister's boutique, pictures of a very, very dark and gross future chasing her.

"Oh well, time to clean up." Rarity sighed and licked one of her hooves clean. "Tastes like Rainbow."



Yes, I'm a little tired, but I had to write this now.

Even if bloodplay isn't my thing, this was short, sweet, and well-written enough to earn my praise. Well done.

Seven wubs. :rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

Snout and muzzle aren't interchangeable. Ponies have muzzles. Other than that, not bad at all.

>another strained moan force it’s way out of Rainbow Dash
>Dash’s thigh having it’s skin broken
>her horn lots it’s glow
>the rhythmic pulse of it’s charged core
>the magical sex toy working it’s real magic
>in the surrounding area having it’s color diluted

"it's" means "it is" or "it has". "its" is possessive.

I gave this its 69th upvote :moustache:

Cute and well written enough that I could somewhat enjoy the blood play, nice work.

Hello, just reread this and I have to say now I'm a bit annoyed at Dash, Rarity is doing a lot for her and she can't even get her off, any chance of seeing a sequel fixing that?

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It's not out of the question.

Glad too hear that.

so thirsty. want blood. NOW!!!!!!!:flutterrage:

My god i loved this and thats not becose i drink my own blood faved

Bravo, my friend. Bravo~

I.cant do it… reading about blood like this kills me man

6166321

Then don't read it. This is why stories have warnings.

I'm a slut for Raridash

Pretty good! Very good.

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