Inside the great castle of Ponyville there lies a sleeping princess, deaf to the cries of her friends to awaken. If she refuses to rejoin them, then perhaps one will have to simply join her.
Pinkie has a voice in her head. He seems like a nice enough sort, and she could always use another friend! Nothing bad ever came from having a voice in your head, right?
well for how short it is, its well written. the only problem i had is this has been done to death now. sorry thats just how i feel about this.
im a grimdark writer my self so dont stop thats for sure.
Thanks for the comment! Yeah, I know the idea's not fresh anymore but that's the story I had in my head to write at that time :)
So.... The Severing, abridged?
Damn twilight is one sick pony.