Equestria is gripped by a new threat: discrimination. Can Rainbow Dash prove blue ponies are not inherently evil?
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I wonder why this doesn't show up in latest updated? Doesn't matter, had blindbag Trixie yesterday.
Anyway, have a chapter. Next one should advance the plot a little.
I just skimmed, but I'm guessing that she had a dream, an argument with Shining, a chance at a healed wing, and a new friendship. Close?
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Close, but no cigar. She doesn't argue, that ain't Rainbow style! (oppa Rainbow style?)
Also, if you skimmed the first paragraph, I pressed that she is indeed dreaming. Although my pre-reader was confused a bit with the dream sequence, I decided to leave it at that, cause he only reads it 'offline', while it was still in my notes, in written form, different angles marked with markers. Boy, is it ugly!
1926436 I read the Prince Mi Amore Shining 'Protocol' Armor the Third. I think it was either Trixie or Dash talking. I skimmed cuz I was in class. Good excuse, right?
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Actually, I type in most of the chapters at work. I still manage with other tasks, though.
"one in one chance that I succeed"
Those are pretty good odds.
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Daaamn, fix'd.