Equestria is gripped by a new threat: discrimination. Can Rainbow Dash prove blue ponies are not inherently evil?
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To those interested in what I was occupied with instead of finishing my other story... Well this. About 30 written pages of this, to be exact. Expect updates relatively soon.
What is this-
READ COMMENCE
You would think out of all ponies, Rainbow would be the smallest target of colorisim, due to her mane!
Interesting concept, will give a real comment after I read it.
1664285 WHAT THE HELL? HOW DO YOU-
You know what? I give up. But when I went to write my above comment, you weren't there.
Anyways, interesting. I would suggest getting rid of the walls of text. Unless they really aren't there, and my phone is acting up again.
I am going to favorite this and see how this unfolds.
Plus it has a Trixie tag. Another reason for me to stay.
1664305 Keep trying, I do slip occasionally!
1664332 DO you read EVERY single new story being posted here?
1664396 Yes.
1664400 seriously? and you coment on all of em too?
1664407 Yes.
1664412 That takes some respect my good sir
I think i remember one you... aw who am i kidding? That's awesome of you. Be kind to thumb em (if you don't do it allready)
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It probably has more to do with their fur colour and not both their mane and fur.
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I think she would be victim to colorism for each and every color of the rainbow. There are situations where cool appearance is dangerous.
Also, please define "wall of text".
1664556 The paragraphs are nonexistant. As I said, I don't know if they are really there as my phone pikes to act up, but there isn't a single break in the story. I can see that there are when ponies start talking. But paragraphs exist to break up and piece together ideas in small, organized places.
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I don' know, I'm viewing it on a PC, and paragraphs show up just fine. Maybe it's just your phone, but can others tell me if they have this problem, please?
On a side note, I've finished my other story, so I'll focus on this one now.
Hrm.I might read an update of this to judge a bit more. For now, no vote.
I have misgivings about the way her friends treat her. I know they believe she's done something awful, but the way that happened is rather odd and they abandoned her pretty quick. I did something similar to this actually - but remember that her friends are very close to her - they didn't even ask why she did it or question her about it at all.
Might do an empathy +1 though .
usually it's the pony's race that they're being racist against if it's one of those stories
but this is different, oh yes it is.
imma keep an eye on it, yo.
At first, when AJ kicked best pony in her face, I was like wut. But then, haha, THEN I got it. Faving. Commenting. The works. Though I noticed a few spelling mistakes, such as turing instead of turning, fun levels are to the max.
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Imagine your sister killed by your best friend, witnessed by a hundred people, with the killer being your best friend, who claims he/she does not remember anything. I think you'd be a bit overreacting too, regardless of your previous relationship with them.
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Of course they'd be mad, but they'd also want to know why.
Last time I read a story involving Dashie being framed for something, it involved her subsequent torture by a certain gryphon out of sheer spite, scorn from EVERYONE ELSE, Celsetia and the other elements included (Frequently), who didn't believe a word she said even though pure devistation is an emotions nigh impossible to emulate and at the end, CELESTIA forgave HER, dispite Celes acting like an ignorant bitch and Dashie putting her life at risk several times for the greater good.
But then again, Discord and a changeling drone were to blame that time and the whole thing was infinately more ridiculous than this is thus far. ... (Hesitantly) Tracking for now.
Seems unusual though, that her friends wouldn't notice that murder, especially in front of who the crap knows how many spectators, just doesn't match Dashies personality. She loves attention, but it's been shown she loves POSITIVE attention and goes out of her way to avoid negative.
Believe me, I'm not complaining. This looks like it could be a great story dispite all I've said. Keep it up mate. Still cautious given past experiences though.
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I remember that one! I can't remember the name, though.
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that sounds interesting, what's the name of that story.
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Is that story called Rainbow’s Redemption