Equestria is gripped by a new threat: discrimination. Can Rainbow Dash prove blue ponies are not inherently evil?
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Oh noes!
So yeah, I remember reading the first couple of chapters a while ago. I reserved judgement then, and having read on a bit, I'm still reserving judgement. It was getting better, but I think Celestia has weak justification for being colourist. And the banishment was absurdly casual.
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Celestia is kinda forced here, the Court holding political power and all... will be addressed later, as now Rainbow's viewpoint is dominant, and we know little more than what she knows.
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Celestia comes across as colourist herself. It doesn't feel like she's being forced into it by the Court.
1824842 I agree. Even though she was pressured last we saw her, there's still the whole thing about her immediately having Spear arrested once shit-for-brains reveals he's a Blue despite no crimes committed on his part.
I find myself hoping these 'nobles' end up banished. They seem useless enough to all die within the week if they were and if they're significant entities, the system desperately needs to be renewed. Also curious about Dashies so-called friends, if they FINALLY realize the incident didn't seem right of if they still think she's a psychotic, treacherous murdered even though, well, loyalty. *Smacks head* Seriously, I thought Twilight was supposed to be the rational o- *Looks at previous episodes* (Glumly) My mistake.
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I'm trying something different here, instead of the fandom-wide acceptance of Pinkamena deKillerPony, the murderous git, any suspicion of murder is met with hostility. As for Twilight... who could categorize her aside from having a little OCD? The possibilities are endless.
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My only complaint is that I think Dash should applaud slowly as Trixie passes away. That was...
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Ah, yes, the gifs are here at last
I'm not sure I understand you. Dash should applaud her death? Why would she be happy from Trixie dying?