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Tightly wrapped are the chains of immortality and heavy is the metal out of which they are forged. To live forever is the greatest gift and also the cruelest of curses. One that not even the gods would wish on their enemies.
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Don't be so hard on yourself, this was amazingly well written, and beautifully described. If you haven't submitted this to Equestria Daily yet, I highly suggest you do. I think it has a good chance of going through.
This reminds me a bit of mine own story, but I felt you executed it much better then me.
Such a dark thought. Would Luna, had the roles been reversed, have imprisoned Celestia on the sun? Enough philosophising on my part though, more.
Poor Luna, stuck there with nothing to do day after day.
Nicely done, you've got a lot of writing potential. This story is well constructed. I loved the sporks joke, and it was funny when he wondered what "pandemonium" would taste like.
5 stars. I think we've got a similar voice. Check out my story page to see if you agree.
....No words I can offer could possibly do what you have written justice. Just... Holy shit. Holy shit.
I feel sorry for Celestia in a way, she must miss Luna so much.
Absolutely amazing. I don't think I've ever read something so powerful.
I loved this. All of it. It showed such a dark side of Princess Celestia that I would never have even imagined on my own. And the entire story contains so much poetic imagery and emotions that I just...wow. Thank you.
Each section of this story are all powerfully written and rich with emotions and imagery, but carry themselves with distinctively different tones. Fantastic piece of writing.
An interesting insight into Discord's mind.
Well written, thought provoking. Excellent characterization.
Extra points for the Star Trek refs.
Bleakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
Oh, sorry. This was so depressing, my fingers keep slippingggg.......
Holy s**t. Holy damn it all to holy f**king s**t.
I...I think I need to go lie down. That was just...yikes.
Wow, that was exactly the tragic piece I was looking for. Well, more philosophical for Discord, but that's splitting hairs, and that was a fun kind of philosophical.
Boredom, loneliness, regret. Yes, I think that sums up those three nicely. Of course I doubt we'll get these themes this strongly in the actual show, a bit too dark and deep for the target demographic, but this is exactly what I think of when I think of them.
Seriously, why isn't this more viewed than it is?
> “I’m going to need a mariachi band.”
You have my respect
This make me sad
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I feel this is grossly unrecognized, it should have over 600 likes instead of a mere 32.
Fucking incredible!!
Wow. Celestia's was the best by far and the other two were fantastic work too. Amazingly nice work here.
Poor Luna, that ending..... one of the saddest things I have ever read...but SOOO good
I thought all of these were fantastic, Luna's was clearly the best and most emotional, particularly the ending, I mean wow... but the others were great too, I thought the night guard was a nice touch
This is effing good story.
Nuff said.
135749 LOL, you think?
This needs WAY more views. So great.
Is there a sequel or epilogue in the works?
Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.
115971 What is the name of that story?