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Harmony Charmer


♪ Kingdom of ships around me and it looks like I'm the queen ♫

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After losing her beloved, Celestia finds it difficult to continue on without him. But, she should be fine, right? It's not the first time she lost somepony close to her. So why is she so broken about it now?

Discord will have no idea what to make of what he'll learn.


This is a Princess CelestiaxAU King Sombra
This is inspired by the Reflections Arc of the MLP Comics, which runs through issues 17-20.

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Comments ( 57 )
Snuggly #1 · Aug 11th, 2014 · · 18 ·

Good story. Couldn't stop laughing :rainbowlaugh:

That was so sweet.

Oh I hope there is more to this! This was a nice twist to a great story line.

So cutes.
I like it.

Aw. I loved this.

D'aww. I see a few stories about alter-Sombra and Tia but never one where they had a child.

Supportive Discord is best Discord.

So... Celestia has a child and then imprisons her in some magical stasis... for a thousand years??

Really?

During the first part when luna wanted to get inside and talk to Tia i couldnt stop thinking adout the frlzen song "Do u wanna build a snowman?"

4833728 More like this fanmade song based off of that song from the movie:

4833649 If you had a forbidden lover from another alternate universe that nopony knew about and you somehow ended up as a parent to their kid, how would you explain to your world who the dad is? Lies always end up exposed, somehow. Besides, Celestia would have to tell the truth to her daughter someday. All in all, Harmony Charmer, you have made a very beautiful story that nearly made me cry. Wonderful job.

4833649 No the filly was growing very slow

4834057 :pinkiegasp: Yah and u gotta give props to the singers but yah just like that

Should make a continuation of this story.

That was a little piece of beautiful.

That was nice. I don't have any other thoughts on it other than that it was nice.

Very Good! :heart::heart::raritywink::raritywink::raritywink::rainbowkiss:













As always!!!!:twistnerd:

Wait, what! :rainbowhuh:Was that in the comic or are you just really,really, really good at fooling me

This is a great written story are you going to make a squel?

Interesting concept! This is an excellent.... start. :ajbemused:

It seems to possibly need more...maybe...kinda sorta? Still though, a lot of short stories do end this way, so it does work....kinda sorta. :pinkiehappy:

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Given her position, power, status, and how pony kind reveres her, she could just say "Immaculate Conception". That one has held up for over 2000 years.

I'm pretty sure the ponies would buy it hook, line and sinker. Or she could just put on a smug "I know more than you do, mortal" smile and ignore the question. That's worked for cats ever since they domesticated us.

oh my god O_O
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS O_O

Awww... Such a sweet story! :fluttercry:

This story was so sweet it made me cry! Damnit celestia! You made me ruin my eyeliner!

Noop?

"Noop." Discord told himself. "She doesn't like you, and she even told Luna to shove it so you're not qualified."

Is that like noob, or is it meant to be nope?

Have you ever considered submitting this story to Equestria Daily? You can find out how to do so here.

This story almost made me cry. I'm serious, and it takes a lot to get that sort of reaction out of me.

edit: Just read the comic this was based off of. This makes even more sense now. God... I feel for Celestia...

4838147 Or she could say she had the filly with Luna.

Several stories have done that already and gotten away with it. :twilightoops:

Seeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeequeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeelplz

This was pretty damn well written. I really liked it. Perhaps, a sequel?

Please, for the good of all of us, come out with a sequel placed in Reflection's adolescence years.
:fluttercry: <Please?

Oh God, the feels. :fluttercry::

A sequel, please? :fluttershysad:

A nice story. I hope there is going to be a sequel? :fluttershysad:

You went there. Of course you went there. Can we just stop going there for like a month? Can we have a site wide ban on sad fics for the next month so I can recuperate? Is this a thing we can do?

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Yeah, imagine what her subjects, who adore and couldn´t live without her (literally) , would say. They would demand a republic government in the spot :facehoof:
Near a thousand years keeping her own daughter trapped, alone, to keep her own image of perfection... Tia, even Mother Gothel had a better record than yours.:ajbemused:

It was good, but I don't understand how it brought people to tears.

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Celestia a mother . . . and her child a being who wasn't supposed to exist.

I'm a terrible person. This story gave me the giggles.

Whoa whoa whoa. Whoa Celestia a mother? Didn't expect that. So I guess Sombra is the father. Now I see why the story is named Hidden Reflection. Btw great story! Sequel?

Sweet story. Maybe its just me, but I've been noticing a lot of "Celestia as a Mother" fics recently. But this is one of the better ones to me.

A very moving little story, though feels as though it's only a beginning. Given what others have done with similar tribulations, I (and other) would love to see this carried forward more.

"Looks like I'm gonna have to launch into 'Comfort Female Friend' mode like I did when Flutters watched that stupid dog movie..."

Not Old Screamer!!! :fluttercry:

Love this story! Please another sequel :fluttershysad:

may i feature this fic in my somblestia fanblog?
http://reflectionshipping.tumblr.com

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Totally! Thanks for asking for permission first, that's real nice of you!

OOOOOOOOOOOOOH right in the feels

i like that there can be a kind-of-dislestia fic that doesn't blatantly disregard Celestia's actual canon love interest. :moustache: very cool.

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