Queen Chrysalis, seeking vengeance on Twilight, Cadance, and Celestia, uses a spell that transports her to the Land of Ooo and the Candy Kingdom. Princess Bubblegum seeks help from Celestia and Luna. Twilight and Cadance are sent to Ooo to make sure Chrysalis's plan doesn't succeed. Because once Chrysalis takes over the Candy Kingdom, Equestria will be next!
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This is a crossover with Adventure Time and My Little Pony; Friendship is magic
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This could be a good story, but you should work on not having the plot move so fast.
That description... could be much more effective if it was shorter. Here, I'll give you a trimmed down version:
There, that's much easier to read, and more likely to get readers interested. Any details removed should be covered in the story itself.
... Also, I think you should include a line saying what this is a crossover WITH.
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YES! Thank you! I know, it was bad I am HORRIBLE at that kind of stuff
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Sorry about that, I sometimes make things a little fast
I am trying to plan on slowing things down a bit in the next chapters.
I
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But you forgot to mention what it is a crossover WITH. 
I'm guessing "Adventure Time" from the image source, but I don't know anything about that show...
I'm just glad to see you took my advice.
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When I uploaded it, it was late and I was really tired and re-reading it I really did rush it a bit and such. 
I apologize about that as well
And thank you very much for the help
can't help but feel twilight will complain on how little sense Ooo makes, maybe even thinking "maybe it's not so bad?"and then -crazy crazy crazy, right up her face-.
looking forward to an Angry and confused twilight.
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Haha yes!
I shall try to make this happen in the next chapter, I believe
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for inspiration try this http://www.colbertnation.com/the-colbert-report-videos/81893/february-07-2007/tek-jansen---from-the-future start at 2:22, crazy and confusing
And in the end. this was all just another fanfic made by the ice king
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HOW DID YOU KNOW?
Lol jk
...
but now its like I wanna use that..
WE WILL SEE IN THE END
im what my friend calls "sleepy drunk", its 5:21 am, and everything is dizzy....so you earn random faces of ponies nao
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AAAAWWW YEAH!
Sorry for the short chapter, if you wanna call it that.
I am kind of having writers block, I know what to write but I can't seem to type it down.
I will try and post a real chapter later or tomorrow, possibly tomorrow
THIS IS WHAT I HAVE BEEN LOOKING FOR MY WHOLE ENTIRE LIFE! YUS YUS YUS! i love it XD
i just noticed that the emotions dont have luna D:
*clears throat* ahem,wheres another chapter m'am?