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Jade Ring


The purpose of a story is that it's a story. It can be more, but it can never be less.

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The day finally comes when Pinkie Pie has to part with her beloved Gummy. Of course, that's easier said than done.

Inspired by and featuring the song 'Saying Good-Bye' by the Muppets.

A live reading of the story by munngojerrie;
[youtube=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2pv0Qv8RE8w&list=FLcX2TP5-17UTWAR5PyQNGUw&feature=mh_lolz]

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Comments ( 47 )

That was simply beautiful :pinkiesad2:

Bravo good sir. Man tears are shed :pinkiesad2:

Did you write that song? That was beautiful! Manly tears were shed:raritycry::fluttercry:

A sweet and short one-shot.
Upvoted and favorited.

She could always visit him at the bog?

A very touching little story. Thoroughly enjoyed the song :twilightsmile:

Could've done with a little dialogue in the first half to bring it to life
but otherwise, it was a very nice 'lil story :rainbowkiss:

"...began to sing."

Nope! Nope! I'm not reading ANY farther. I am NOT going to start crying at 6 in the morning!

1619091 No. The song is from the film 'the Muppets Take Manhatten.'

While I usually avoid sad stories... This one... I don't know why, but this one made me stop and read.

Good job. It is sad indeed, but also beautiful. It shows the sensitive side of Pinkie that we so rarely see.

Bittersweet. I also avoid sad stories, but I read this one anyway. It was heartwarming despite being sad.

1619420 ...Well, yeah. I guess she could.

This wasn't one of those 'let me write to tell a story' stories. This was 'oh god I'm so sad must get these feelings out before they destroy me' stories. Hence the shortness and lack of dialogue.

1620417 than make a damn sequel:fluttershysad:

Anything Muppets deserves a medal, so have one. *sniff*

great story i loved it

1619420 But it still wouldn't change the fact that he has to live in the wild now and can't come back with her. :fluttercry:

I'm so sorry this day had to come Pinkie Pie, but Gummy will always remember you. :pinkiesad2:

That wasn't nearly as depressing as what I expected. I was half expecting it to be his dying day rather than being let go.

This was sweet and sad. Good job.

This is a song symbolizes the end with a bittersweet ending. Fits well for a walk home theme, like Pinkie's doing.

Silver out!

I hate you so much, but I love you at the same time :fluttercry: so many tears... so many

This is one of the few fics that has ever made me cry.:fluttercry: Great job.

Amazing Sir just amazing :pinkiesad2:, can't wait for "Dear Scootaloo", when is that coming out?
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:/5

1623835 If my timing is correct, 2-4 weeks. In the mean-time, watch out for two more chapters of 'Morning Glory' and the start of 'the Hearth's Warming Eve Carols.'

The feels...... :fluttercry:

Definitely one of the more sad stories that I've read, though 'Simply Rarity' is so much worse on the feels. Go read it on EQD. It's great.

Awwwww! That made my heart break into a million tiny pieces! Awesome story!:pinkiesad2:

You left out part of the song lyrics.....still, so beautiful....

I swore to myself that I wouldn't read ths because of all the feels. Then you made the contest... The feels I have for my old cat Merlin...
Lie on ground
Try not to cry
Cry a lot
:pinkiesad2:

I could not have cried more over a story. :raritycry: :fluttercry:

at the beginning of the story when he says this is for Ryder that reminded me of the rottweiler that my parents had before I was born..... his name was Ryder too.

Darn it! This is the 5th story I've read by you today and 4 of them made me cry unexpectedly. Good job :pinkiesad2:

The feels
Oh god the feels

Hi! I actually read your story right after it was linked to in the comments of mine, and I must say that I really, really enjoyed it. The last pony pet playdate was a really sweet idea, and I cried for poor Pinkie as she bade her Gum-drop a farewell. Awesome job!

All of my feels are belong to you :raritycry:

sad labeled book bet Its not that sad...:rainbowderp:..I um..i:applecry:...NO I WONT DO IT..:fluttershysad:...um..ok...um:fluttercry:...it liquid pride im not...:raritycry:

the feels:pinkiesad2: I LOVED it:heart:

that was nice

Feels, sadness, but not breaking out tears from my eyes.

Welp, the same result as many good sad stories.

You made me cry :pinkiesad1:

This was really well written, made perfectly to cause the emotions desired; really amazing work.

No fair you can't make me cry over an alligator with no personality.

I'm just gonna say WHAT ON EARTH?! WHY AM I CRYING OVER AN ALLIGATOR (OR CROCODILE) THAT ONLY BLINKS THREE TIMES A DAY?!

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