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In a dark future where Princess Celestia and Luna are nowhere in sight, Pinkie Pie takes it upon herself to rule Equestria. Waging a party war against party crashing griffins she finds herself cornered with no other option but to go back in time using her 4th wall breaking powers to meet her past self. Using strengthened ability to break the 4th wall Pinkie Pie travels the multiverse and delves into fanfics written by much better authors to gather an army of Pinkie Pies to throw the ultimate party against the oncoming horde of party crashing griffins. First chapter doesn't really have much of alter universes or crossovers but there will be lots of that later on if I decide to keep going with this pet writing project.

P.S. if you catch some of the references I make in this then you my friend are awesome

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Comments ( 24 )

Oh jeez. I cant wait for this to countinue.

Keep up The good work :)

army of pinkie pies.....BY GOD EVEN THE KROGEN WOULD RUN IN FEAR!

114257 Well I'll write a few more chapters as long as it manages to keep my interest, how far it goes depends on how popular it gets.

Pinkie Pie ruling Equestria?! In the words of Nibbler, "Quick. Everyone, out of the universe." Oh wait, Pinkie can break the 4th wall, WE ARE NOT SAFE ANYWHERE!
Anyway, now that I have that out of my system, the story looks really good and funny. I'm going to add it to my track list to read later.

Holy shit. I squealed like a fangirl in some of this.

YUGIOH ABRIDGED!!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: “Oh my god a giant rock!” <-- Favorite line in the whole series!! :rainbowkiss:
there's no emoticon to explain my happiness right now :yay::twistnerd::twistnerd:

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:fluttershysad: My god what have you done! U just DOOMED the Universe!
:moustache: oh well... I 4 one welcome our new Pinkie Overlords. please keep up the good work my good sir.

Great potential here, keep it up.
It does start a bit slow, but I guess there's only so much one can do in one chapter without dropping too much exposition on the reader.
So I'm looking foward to many new chapters.
And I'm curious about what crazy alternate universes you can come up with.

I also had a similar idea for a FF, but I'm glad that only that multiverse part is the only real similarity.

A whole army of Pinkies across the universe..... Mother of Celestia, we're all doomed.

Also the "Twilights Blessing" was a reference to WoW was it not?

114339 "YUGIOH ABRIDGED!!!! “Oh my god a giant rock!” <-- Favorite line in the whole series!!"

heh yeah not only that but the buildup to the giant rock line was also exactly the same just a bit ponyfied

"Pinkie Pie come closer and witness something incredible, what your about to hear will change your life forever.”

114352 "I also had a similar idea for a FF, but I'm glad that only that multiverse part is the only real similarity. "

Yeah i really hope it doesn't look like I copied someone elses idea, one can't be aware of every fanfic ever made after all. If someone did a fanfic with the exact same idea as I had then o well, at least they wouldn't be exactly the same, unless Pinkie Pie decides to be a jerk and invade my account and copy + paste said fanfic to make me look like a dirty theif

The party will last....fooooorrreeeevvveeerrr!

Well there's chapter 2. Had fun with it but I kinda ran out of steam towards the end and I wanted to wrap it up. So I just rushed Pinkie out of there with a few more gags :D :pinkiehappy:

Witchcraft is magic reference? Yay!

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Damn, I knew I had misplaced her somehow...

Finally, Zecora can talk straight!

Sweating Bullets :3
I love the idea of this story, but the writing could use some touching up.

I thought pinkie liked rhyming :pinkiecrazy:

You were right to warn about spoilers, :twilightsmile: I just finished ch.20 of 'The Empty Room'

This story is cool, but I think you should use completed stories like 'My Little Dashie' *winkwink*nudgenudge*prodprod*pokepoke*slapslap*punchpunch*shotgun-to-the-faceshotgun-to-the-face*:pinkiecrazy::derpytongue2:

Ok, this is just getting awesome.

Although I think Celestia took the unknown pink ponies sudden appearance alittle too easy. If I were her, I'd pretty much be spazing out the questions just like Twilight did when she was resurrected.

128538 well the way I see it she's thousands and years old and very kind and accepting of everything, I get a lot of influences from Dr Who so with that said I imagine any character thousands of years old to be like the Doctor. Just kind of whenever they see anything crazy they don't question it, they just accept it for what it is because since they can live for so long the answers will come to them eventually.

The concept is very unique and brings out the best of Pinkie Pie, no matter what form she comes in.

Can I suggest two other Pinkie Pie characters for this story?
1. Pinkie Pie (canon, modern) - No one bucks or stands a chance against the original. Besides, eight years of the original character to the present time provides the most fourth-wall breaking and other supernatural feats ("The One WherePinkie Knows," "Party Pooped," "Wonderbolt Academy," "Testing Testing 1, 2, 3," etc.)
2. Pinkamena Diane Pie (filly, Primum Non Nocere (The Secret of the Mad Mare's Precognition) - A headcanon incarnation, the ordeals faced by this orphan explain a lot of the nature of canon Pinkie Pie. Orphaned after a fire overtakes the community she once lived in, Pinkamena suffers under the constant taunting of a phantasmal entity who appears older, wiser, and more menacing than she is truly. Revealed later in the story, this haunting phantom who shares and occasionally takes control of her body is revealed to be the lingering deceased filly of the orphans' caretaker. The filly, Aster, had her own beliefs and philosophies, which ultimately ended with her death and grudge against her mother Emese Sunblossom. Pinkie's Pinkie Sense is and unique abilities are explained as the products of Aster's failure, due to Pinkamena's clumsiness, to properly complete a ritual which will allow her to have control of her own destiny. Apparently, said ritual's failure had some effect on Pinkamena's body and mind, making it so she is able to have a connection to the near future events as well as alter her body in strangely remarkable ways (her tail was able to support Emese Sunblossom's full body weight when said mare was injured.)
*WARNING: This story incorporates two Cupcakes-esque segmentscarried out by Aster, but no cannibalism and further are present. Said details of these segments are not essential to plot, but the aftermaths are important to both Aster and Pinkamena's fate at the end - Pinkamena Diane is adopted by the Pie family after the third attempt at the ritual is perpetrated upon Emese Sumblossom herself.*

This story, like the two listed above, is truly incredible in its uniqueness. I do not care if the fanfiction is poorly written or the plot is absurd or a discontinuation in Season 3! Keep on with your ideas, for nothing is better but to try with your imagination.
Remarkable story, truly. Please continue!

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