Who would really win in a fight between Celestia and Luna?
No buildup, no plot, just a simple, epic fight between our two favorite goddesses.
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ROUND 1: FIGHT!
Edit: Needs more Michal Bay. but it delivered what you said it would.
Interesting, but I think that the Royal Guard would have showed up once the nobles all left and helped Celestia. Other than that I found this amazingly written
Have a mustache 
665576 yay, I love mustaches! *squee*
That was a really awesome story. Could you make a part two with a backstory pertaining to why Luna attacked Celestial, and why she had to kill her? Thanks!
Lol. Luna's all
and Celestia's all 
.
665503 Yeah I was thinking about putting in some Michael Bay but then decided I didn't want to bog down the story with dog fucking and racist comic relief.
I would also like to know why Luna decided to murder her sister, since she doesn't really seem evil here. It would also be interesting to see a sequel in the form of "Elements of Harmony vs. Luna", because you know it's going to happen.
Although, just as a side note, Luna's smoke form is sort of game breaking here, and it's a little hard to believe that the pony incarnation of the sun runs out of energy so quickly. Besides, Celestia beat Luna once already...
mortal kombat!
665796 Okay well, just think of it this way....shut up. Besides last time she used the elements. Also this isn't exactly canon, just a "what if" outside of the show, just imagine it takes place hundreds of years in the future or something.
EDIT: Oh and also, remember how easy she got beat in the show? would you prefer something like that? I didn't think so.
665836
No need to be rude about it.
Sequel: Trollestia vs. Trolluna
No but seriously I honestly think even without Elements of Harmony Celestia could have won....
the elements only served as her moon cannon not as the tool that actually beat up nightmare moon
But regardless well written and cool
And make an epilogue where it was all just a video game!
Please... I mean.. If you want to...
666786 ummmmm...eeeeeh.....aaaaah....okay....
666807 I mean.. Only if you want to...
666816 curse you! how can I say no to that adorable Fluttershy face?
666820 Oh... I'm sorry...
666825 No, no Fluttershy. It's okay. Here, have a sugar cube. There, there...it's all better now.
666836 But... Are you still going to write the epilogue? I mean... If you want to...
666846 aaaaaaaand done, there you go.
wait...do I have to label this as a comedy now? Meh, if I did it would probably ruin the lulz.
666924 Thank you!
It explains the random attack on Celestia.
I knew that was going to be the ending. That cheating Luna.
Ohhhh.........................THAT'S what happened! Thank you!
Wow. I kinda teared up right there... Right near the end. And then you just... Whoa. It was like telling someone their family just died and then saying "lol, jk, man I really had you going there." I feel confused... Still great story. Though now I kinda wanna see how the other gods/ponies fare against each other. Like, depleted Luna vs. any one of the mane 6 (to make the fight fair) or full powered Luna vs. the mane six sans elements of harmony necklaces, again, to make it fair. I dunno, I think you should give it a go... Srsly, please do more pony street fighter...
680037 sorry to hear that, but people were really pissy about what was up with the random attack and about Luna winning so I just added that ending so people would stop saying Luna could never beat Celestia.
oh no, you read me all wrong! it was a great story, and that little jerk around did nothing but add to it!
anyway, you didn't respond to my mane concern, which was will you be doing more of these? just picking any two characters out of a hat and having them fight to the death? because, strangely, i enjoyed it, and it'd be REALLY cool to read Lyra Heartstrings bashing Rarity's brains out with her lyre. Morbid, i know, but I'm kinda crazy that way... so will you? Shadowpony0071 hit on exactly what i was thinking. Mortal Kombat Style. or Street Fighter. Whatever. only now you don't have to explain why ponies are randomly murdering eachother, as you've already provided a perfectly equitable arrangement.a great idea would bee for you to roleplay in a conversation battle. for eg, when me and a friend just experimented with this, i was Vinyl Scratch and he was Lyra Heartstrings. i pulled out the bass cannon, he played magical bass cancelling music, etc. it got REALLY good.i mean come on! who wouldn't want a story where it all ends because Vinyl threw a record and it lopped their head off? haha, I'll leave you with that disturbing image now...
absolute GENIUS!!!!