• Member Since 30th Oct, 2012
  • offline last seen Mar 14th, 2013

The Pony On The Moon


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An adventure and action story with a few hints of mystery...
Not intended to be a re-write of Fallout Equestria but some elements may be related to it!

Somepony has to rebuild a fallen empire right? It takes time...
But luckily out in the Equestrian Wastes time is aplenty.
But those who are willing to do that, are few.

NOTICE:
I will be updating this every 5-10 days...
That's including school but I may have something that gets in the way!
I will announce if I'm going on holiday etc

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 3 )

Alright, so far i'm liking the concept a bit. For one, I find facility 202 to be a rather interesting type of place, along with the turrets being powered according to how many unicorns were present at the time. There are a few errors though, such as spelling and repetition, that can be found throughout your story. I recommend getting a pre-reader to clear a few of those issues up. Also, Alex and Sarah are both very human names. They stick out like a sore thumb in a place such as Equestria, even after an apocalypse.

1603479 I've been planning on getting one! Thanks...

And so the story goes dark. The creator cancelled it and no one is commenting. So sad to see stories die like this.

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