Predators. The predator or by its species name Yautja have been hunting for millions of years as is there tradition, but occasionally the species will find a new species to hunt other than the Xenomorph's or the Humans and it just so happens the new species are the pony's of this new world. Now there are 3 un-Blooded predators on there way to this planet to become blooded and earn there honor and make trophies out of all there prey. So now lets begin.
Note: The Yautja go by a strict honor code that honor code is to not kill anything that cant defend itself. So in turn if a pony cant defend itself (A pony with a diesease that will debilitate it or will kill it eventually) than the predator wont attack it... but if a predator sees a weapon it will kill said pony.Also aliens show up later.
SO INCREDIBLY EDGY
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2Edgy4me?
2380695 How is it edgy. I think its a good way to start the fic. It lays down the foundations.
Your one ugly motherfucker.
2382182 My favorite line from Predators.
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its mine to, nice to see it is a sort of Easter Egg in this story
2381006 I like it but according to twilghts book the predators helped them before so why attack them?
Hopefully we get to see more action. Love the predators fics!
2384925 Well the predators helped the humans back in egyptian days and so in turn the humans were grateful to the predators. long story short predators friends with humans. Humans think predator are gods so humans follow anything predator say. and predators impregnate humans with face huggers.
Oh yeah keep in mind the next chapter will be done today so. Yeah
If wolf dies you die got it
2386006 Don't worry I don't kill of main characters in the story.
And wolf doesn't die for like 212 years.
Aliens vs Predator (The game) 2010 one
you need more commas. its vital for the future of this fic
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Like, this
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I,m putting the story on hiatus. I have to focus on school currently.
I will get back to this in 2 months after my break.
You should probably get an editor or check your spelling before you post the chapters.
I don't like how you're portraying the Yautja, but whatever.
2412307 I have a editor.
2412368 How do you think the Yautja would act. Like animals who work mainly on instinct and don't talk to each other. Also I tried a different style of making this chapter, and if you don't like what I have written then oh well. Every writer has a different style.
The chapter has errors so you might want to talk to your editor about looking more closely.
2414883 okay :)
So this is my first question to ask you readers. What do you think of the characters and tell how I can make them better ?
2386006 So I added a new chapter. Thought you might want to check it out.
2385308 Hope you enjoy the new chapter.
2406306 Two months he said... more like two years.
2412368 Yeah I should have agreed with you but that was a year ago. I will portray the Yautja in an better way.
4179969 Bring in Scarface from Concrete Jungle.
4181126 I really like that idea. Thanks.
Well, this grabs my attention
4186871 Great I hope you enjoy it.
Might be a new chapter today. Keep your ears to the ground.
Wolf
Save Serpent
Wolf
Save Night Stalker
Wolf
Kill that Shimmering, Black armored bastard !
Dark
Save Celtic
Dark
Go after Shimmer
LAAAAAAAAAME
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4548207 Aww.
I'm curious of what the abomination is, sounds interesting.
4548773 It's celestia. I thought everyone knew it was celestia.
Oh yeah, it mention that in earlier chapters, sorry I must've forgot. I'm troubling with remembering stuff
4549001 Did you vote on what you want to happen next chapter yet ?
Well I vote that dark should save Celtic and that wolf should save serpent, because I sense an epic battle bettween him the crushers
4550740 Well thank you for voting because I can't really make a next chapter without people voting.
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4591775 What ?
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Celestia Abomination? Really? This doesn't make sense to me!!!!! And now she is DEAD!!!!!!!
4591790 It's mainly about what the Yautja think about her. She is a mixture of multiple pony's so if you think about she is an abomination. Did you read any of the previous chapters ?
2386006 Are you still reading this fic ?