• Published 18th Nov 2012
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Wings of love - DrTechno



You move to Cloudsdale to escape your past, but ends up making a new

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3031231
Yeah, it was a blast writing this and I wish I could make more stories just as good. I just felt I would give it a better one seeing that I kind messed up the first time around.

Thinking of maybe start the Rarity and Spike, I kinda want to try that couple out next

fuck the rainbow!
Taste the rainbow.

Other than that, sweet heartwarming ending.

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Do you have any plans with your FlutterMac and DuskSparkle Stories in the near future?
I would actually like to see more of both these couples.

3034648 ooooooooooh, yeah I probably should take them out of hiatus, shouldn't I?

Know what, I'll put the anthro Ditzy and human Rarity off and instead continue on those. Thanks for reminding me :twilightsmile:

3034678

Glad I could help.
But please, don't feel as if you had to write these first. I know rather well how it is to push yourself to write something. And if you feel committed to do it, it often kills your imagination.

3035196 Well I've already had something up for TwiDusk, it just needed some adjustments and finish the sex scene. FlutterMac is a bit more difficult, but we'll see what will happen there

Oh, is this final chapter is because you are planning a sequel with Gildas revenge or continue to see how things have being going with Shy? Because I will like to see that

3054749 Well I felt the Gilda being this horrible ex needed a conclusion seeing how she was brought up only once and never mentioned again. The end that I'd originally made was a bit shitty with little climax (no pun intended) so I thought a meeting where they really got Gilda off would be a good way to really end it.

Now the FlutterMac fic is basically an extension from this one. I planted mentions of that the other mane six also had started to get together with someone else which I'm still working on. Gilda was just meant to be a bad guy and I haven't thought of any sequel for her sorry.

Satisfaction has been reached. Sadness is achived. Damn it I love you Dashie!

wow, the story passed a 1,000 views :pinkiegasp:

This was me 39 weeks ago, a little over 9 month ago and suddenly it has barely under 4,500 views and 200 likes. That is what I call insane... also Pinkie, but that's another story :pinkiehappy:

Thanks for all who have helped me which I have forgotten to mention before and to all you who have followed and liked. MIght not be able to make something quite like this again, but I will try my darnest.

3118692
Gratz on the massive likes :rainbowkiss:

3180187 Would habe ahd it if you hadn't helped me most of the way :twilightsmile:

I don't want this to end is there another story that goes with this:raritydespair::raritydespair::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2:its a good story WHY MUZT GOOD THINGS DIE!!:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

3187140 well sorry, it was my first tory ever and I didn't have a proofread. Beinf foreign doesn't help either.

3222645 yeah sorry, it has been half a year since I wrote this without a proofreader on the first chapter. I also wrote on OpenOffice which sucked but since then I've picked up on my spelling.

3323738 I KNOW, stuff I've written for almost a year ago without proofreader had typos. I would love to go back and update it but I have other stories people are asking me to continue so please, cut me a break with old grammar.

3405043 a one on one fight or at least something that only concerns two people.

truly amazing story Dr. Techno. I love it:moustache:

3410917 why thank you, I hope my other stories can be just as entertaining :twilightsmile:

3411319 thank you. I hope I do as well:moustache:

Have I mentioned how the cover art about Human! Rainbow is cute and fitting!?

3847860 Well you have now :twilightsmile:
It was actually changed on account from my old proofreader

4106360 thank you, though it's a bit rigged seeing how it's one of my first fics I ever wrote. Have been thinking of maybe go back on the earlier parts a clean things up but it's kinda nostalgic for me now so I'm not sure

You should write a sequel for this and keep it going. It was a really awesome story. About 20% cooler.

4844469 I dunno, this was meant as a one time thing but it seems people wants more even though it's over a year old... I don't have any ideas on how to make a sequel to this even. I tried once but it ended up as a bit of a failure so I removed it... thought I guess it deserves a sequel at soke point... we'll see, I might do it :)

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Maybe a "spin-off" instead of a sequel? The two (separate stories) sharing moments, like both mentioning the same hearts warming eve party. It tells us more details from other perspectives. A lot of people like that sort of thing.

I'm not saying to stick on this just saying as a thought.

Also, I loved this fic, it hits hard.

THE FEELS CAN KILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :eeyup:

5322643 why thank you, I hope I might bring some less mature stories in the future soon and wish they will be just as good as this

This story got me started writing stories for Fimfiction and it inspired me to write the way I do. Thank you so much for your contribution and give yourself a pat on the back for making one of the best fics I've ever read :heart:

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Then it should be "mano a mano" no "a mano el mano"

"a mano" is like saying we are equal, "¿el mano?" well, mano is hand but then it should be "la mano" no el mano

5417892 I never had Spanish in school and I wasn't smart enough to look up the spelling during writing :P

“With you as the father he’s sure to be.”
Aaaaaaaaand point 1 to dashie. :rainbowlaugh:

6026632 really think I should clean up this story

I like it, this site needs more humanized stories

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