What would you do if you woke up and found yourself turned into one of your favorite MLP characters? No, no, not a pony, try a zebra. Would you be amazed? Scared? Excited?
How about PANIC?
My name is Jace Banner, and I didn't really ask for this, but I'm trying to make the most of it. I don't know why, but I've become the one and only potions master Zecora, and apparently I've got a lot more in store for myself than I think.
Help me!
A part of the PonyEarthVerse series
Illustrations done by Chocolatechilla
This Chapter I like it
Derpy wants to see, what this fic might be!
Even the chapter name rhymes!
Heya Guys, my first fimfiction so we'll see how this goes
if you have any opinions or adivce I'm all ears though. till then, (goes back to writing chapter 2 )
I like this one with the rhymes, although I don't have any dimes.
1571081 This was adorable! I love it!
I'll check this out later. I must sleep first.
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I see whatcha did there
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It can not be!
There's a rhyme for you.
ooh, I will have to check this tomorrow *yawns* Zecora's rhyming ways torment so many writers I have to see how having "her" as a main character will work out.... anyways night all
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:D
The moment I saw Pensacola... So many memories of my life popped right into my head. Well I lived in Gulf Breeze more like but I visited Pensacola ALOT!
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lol yeah, when I saw that no one had done Zecora I was all like "what!? no one has done Zecora!?"
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anywho hope ya like it
- Should be "too".
Other than that, no glaring grammatical errors that I spotted on the first read. Now we've got a griffon and a zebra in our group, I think we need someone to take Iron Will
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noted :3
thanks
Not a bad story for a first. A very old and thoroughly overused idea with only a minor twist, though the writing is of excellent quality. We'll see where it goes from there.
It's not always black and white but your heart always knows what's right
I find that you will cheer the news
Of this fine stack of good reviews.
Though I find that doggerel verse
Makes my day go from bad to worse!
Be thankful, friend; you only rhyme;
You could be forced to metric time.
By sonnet bound, your tale would founder
Five iambs in line would make me blunder.
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Nice. I likey. I did however notice a single mistake, in your description. The following iforgraphic should help: media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lgup7aYSO01qbolbn.jpg
I think that should be 'Achievement Unlocked - First Steps Again.'
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I like pokemons lol
1573543 That's cool. But you can only know 4 moves at once.
I'm might be breeding some Blitzle soon. Should I or should I not nickname mine Zecora?
Well, this doesn't seem to be too different from the other "Wake up and find yourself in the body of a canon character" stories on here. Feel free to prove me wrong, though.
Nothing I havnt seen before... srsly?
Ppl need to be more creative ;c
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first of, WOWEE guys, I didnt expect such a large positive reaction to chapter 1
you guys are awesome
hope you enjoy chapter 2 ^^ and *spoiler* things are going to get bad in chapter 3
The idea of people turning into characters from the show is new! That's why people like the fic. And from the standpoint of Zecora gives it another nice twist.
I like it!
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Interesting....verrrrry interesting. I look forward to seeing how long you can maintain the rhymes.
Hey guys
Took some time, but chapter 3 was so large I've had to break it up into 2 separate chapters
Hopefully I will be getting chapter 4 up by the end of the week
till then if you have any comments or suggestions I'm all ears
This, my good sir, is genius.
love it!
- This would summarize about half the experiences most children have had.
- You probably meant "as I grabbed a new basket..."
I loved this chapter, the subtlety is nice.
A well-paced chapter to set the line
for an update of an ongoing story, that is fine.
Oh, crud. Now I'm doing it.
I can't wait to read about the look on his parents face's
THIS CLIFF HANGER, ITS MAKIN ME RAGE
Here it is, the much requested chapter 4
Definetly want to thank Reginald1648 for editing and assisting with dialogue for this chapter
enjoy the feels
I want to hurt that mother.
Awaiting further releases.
Damn... just... damn.
Ouch, definitly a harsh departure from the more supportive families in other stories. Good writing though, got my stomach all twisted up.
Poor Jace.
His mother is an idiot.
Understandable reactions from all characters involved. I forget the name, but there is a mental disorder that causes mothers to reject their children in such a manner, some even going as far as to turn their hatred on themselves. I took a look online for it, but the closest I could find in my brief search is munchousen syndrome by proxy, which is completely different.
Hey, I really like this! Didn't expect it, but apparently I was wrong^^
I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
Comrade I ask that you make more of this epic fic it is better than most of the ponyearthverse fics I have read you deserve my special vodka.
...every damnable ignorant fool in this universe will assume the roster of the so-called 'invasion'.
Why has she not been slapped yet?
...regardless, awaiting further releases.