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(CANCELED) Ditzy has always dreamed of being a superhero, but she knew it would never happen. But when she takes a bite of a radioactive muffin, she finds out that even the biggest of dreams can come true. (Cover art by MintSushi)

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 29 )

pretty good, 3.5 stars so far, surprize me in the next few chapters and it'll be a five.

This..could be good in a funny type of way. Please do keep up the good work.:derpytongue2:

I can't wait to see the adventures of The Derp! Definitely love this idea :rainbowlaugh:

The amount of awesomeness contained in this fic is equal to the fires of Mount Doom.

Dear Readers,

Please forgive me if this chapter isn't as good as my first one. I was stumped and it took me a friggin' week to make this chapter. Sorry it took so long. Thank you all for all your love, support, tracks, and stars. I wish you all awesomeness and radicalness :rainbowdetermined2:

126937 Wait... is that a good thing or a bad thing? :applecry:

I thought it was a nice chapter and a great insight on what Ditzy was thinking thorughout it. Please do keep up the good work. :derpyderp2:

126977 I don't know. I mean, she's a superhero and all and I guess I don't know how to make something that is supose to be fantasy real. I feel like I let you down though :ajsleepy: I got so many good comments and tracks, and I'm sorry if I didn't do something right. My mom says we may be moving, my sister is having a fight with her boyfriend, everything is just going wrong in my life. So, I appoligize again if I'm doing things wrong or if this chapter isn't good enough. :fluttercry: But now you know the reason. In the words of filly Twilight: I'm sorry I wasted your time.

127057 Thank you. That really puts me at ease. I suck at spelling and grammar and I don't like reading the story after I already typed it so please excuse my god awful spelling. And I'm glad you still like the story even if it's not as good as RagingSemi's or ROBCraken's. And I also appoligize for dumping my issues on you. That wasn't right of me :pinkiesad2:

Oh god I gotta stop being all sorry and shit don't I? :derpyderp1:

Anyway, I hope the next chapter will be better for you and the other nice people who are taking the time to read this pile of mess.

This has to be said, and it has to be said now.

This is one of the most awesome pieces of literature I have ever laid my eyes on. I'm serious. The scope of the amazement in this is staggering. You are typing pure gold. GET THIS PONY A CONGRESSIONAL MEDAL OF HONOR RIGHT NOW.


Now hop in the machine. You've earned your own superpowers.
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127597 Your comment was so nice and awesome, you deserve the best gif I can find on the internet:

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Scores so many points for just being so silly.
I was in stitches half the time.
:pinkiehappy:

I look forward to reading what happens next in your story

D'aww... This is so sweet, cute, funny, and AWESOME! :yay:

very good, work on the spelling errors.

A week is equal to apple sauce."
"Of course it is Ditzy. Of course it is."
I lold. Hey snapple, you've been so supportive of me I decided to try out your stories. I like this one quite a bit, though your grammar could use a bit of work. if you want to get rid of all the italicized stuff, send a me a message with this chapter, NOT FROM HERE, but from when you go to edit the story. i'll fix that right up for you if you want.

very nice.
Though to be fair you may as well have her not wear a mask, unless nobody regardless pf how obvious it is would believe the hero is ditzy ' derpy' doo.

173267 I don't think I'll remove her coustume. I plan on using it in the near future for other chapters. Like this Spider Man scene I plan on doing, the suite is going to be a big part.

its all cool, im just glad your back :D

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