Space is a prison with no bars. It is a place which many seem to escape, but are held back by the simple things in life which hinder their movement. Some though, seek shelter in such an unforgiving place as space. Many have made space their homes, homes with no boundaries to define them. No boundaries, however, leads to problems. Violence, crime, strife, and war are just a few to be listed. No boundaries means no structure, no familiarities, anything and everything is possible. War looms on the horizon, but the citizens are ready for it. For what comes from beyond the veil of the stars, however, they are not.
So... if there were 12 chapters at one point (reference, chapter 12: the one I edited for you a week ago), why are we back down to 2 chapters? Are you releasing them over a period of time? Or are you rewriting them to fit with your non-crossover design?
Interesting,
what was the Gryphon's space presence at the time that Canterlot fell?
Dude, I just totally lost it when I saw title. You blew my mind. Finish the fight.
Yes! Finally!!!
Oooh, I hope we see some awesome weapons from the mystery beings from beyond the stars...
Something like a Hyperspace Cannon:
Wrote that in five minutes
:3 Oh Hell Yes, Here we go....
A Halo crossover?
You have my interest, but I must read later. Sorry.
1577123 Put a track on it so u can find it!
This story is under appreciated!
Moar!
I REQUIRE MOAR, GOOD SIR~! :3
This is a very interesting concept! I do have 1 question though. Is this set incredibly far in the future? Has any of the Mane 6 ever seen proper Ponyville, and is Celestia still alive?
Then again, I have 9 more chapters to read, might get my questions answered.
This story deserves more views.
God damn, that was intense! Great chapter, good description of the firefight!
Hm. I'm sensing these ESI guys are gonna be assholes.
Ships are cool. As are bow-ties.
Yay, more battles coming!
TONIGHT! WE DINE! IN
SPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACEEEE
Griffons incoming!
This story should be posted to EQD, I'm sure this would pass their criteria!
I REQUIRE MOAR.
1616425 I wish it would, but several times, its been denied.
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So many views deserved. I promised I'd read it and I love it thus far. I have to write my own stories now though, will get back to this!
*Sigh* Not this again!
Why must we wait, especially after the dream sequence?!?!
Finally!
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I am not pleased by this prolonged hiatus...