Twilight is helpful, especially when it comes to her friends. So naturally, when Applejack needs help with her orchard, Twilight is happy to help. But then she has to deal with Big Macintosh,. While being a nice stallion, he gets annoying with his....eh....lack of vocabulary. Twilight is sick of this, but what happens when he DOES open up, causing Twilight to fall head over heals for him? Twilight cant admit it to herself at first, but she finds herself in love with that stallion. But what will Applejack say if Twilight dates her brother?
Chapters (10)
INB4 EVERYTHING
Be careful with saying stuff like this. 9/10 times, it can be the equivalent of shooting yourself in the foot.
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Hey thanks! I removed that, just to be safe :D
Seems interesting, I'll read this later. But I thought I should point this out to you: you spelled ORCHARD wrong in your description.
Pinkie*
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No, no, I think he's actually taking about a herd of orcs.
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:3
And I can't believe i mispelled Pinkie as "Pinky." I'm to old of a brony to do that.
TwilightxBigmac?
FINALLY! They're my OTP.
*eagerly grabs to read*
Good first-time story, I'll just correct you on a few things, since you seem open to it. *Grammar nazi hat appears*
1. Pegasus is singular, so plural would be "pegasi" OR, you can use "pegasus ponies" as the show itself does, but you can't really use just "pegasus" by itself like that.
2. That's a run-on sentence. A minor one, but one none-the-less.
*their
This reads rough, so I'm assuming you've accidentally dropped the word "last" there.
That comma really doesn't need to be there.
*had
Pretty sure you meant "it" not "in".
Finally, it's "Eeyup," Not "Yeeup."
*grammar nazi hat disappears*
Not bad at all though for a first-timer
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Haha glad you like the premise! In later chapters im going to really bring the characters personalities into it more throughly
*edit*
Imma fix everything but Yeeeup. Thanks!
Next chapter is a doozy!
....yeah, I'll track it. I like ship fics high on warm fuzzy feelings
Meh, common mistakes for first time writers. Nothing that practice can't fix. Can't fault you to much on the plural of pegasus, considering there are two proper spellings of it. You can use the English "pegasuses" or the Latin "pegasi". Both are grammatically correct though the fandom seems to like pegasi for some reason. I think it's because 'si' sounds are phonetically pleasing. I don't know. I use pagasuses just to piss people off.
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Thanks for the feedback. This is my first Romantic Fanfic, and also my first MLP FIM one. So its hard. But i appreciate any feedback i can get!
You forgot that little tic that's used in Equestria. Instead of saying
“I’m…I’m sorry I’ve made you mad. I want to be your friend too, Twilight! I…I guess I just haven’t felt a need to say anything else…but I hate making people upset.” He said sheepishly.
It should be 'ponies' instead of 'people'.
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whoops, fixed
Nice patch work. Hope to see more, Faust knows we need more TwixMac fics
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Definately. Im still cleaning up what i have. but...heres chapter 3!
awesomic
I kind of find it hard to believe Applejack to be such an emotional wreck, but whatevs'.
And on that note...DAYUM!
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You make an interesting point. I'm going to work on that. Granted, if Twilight was her best friend and she did something like that, it would be a big deal. but now that you mention it Applejack isn't one to vent with tears hardily ever.
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOH! i like this story we need more Twimac, especially something with adventure or tragedy i never saw a Twimac that had that characteristics
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Thanks! Believe me it gets better in coming chapters...muhahahah
MOAR!!!!
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Coming either tommorrow or wednesday, depends on which one i find the time to write. You cant rush quality! ;)
1531129 Just take all the time you need ...
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Workin on it. Are you asking for Big Mac x Rarity? :3
Why not I really don't see how people can hate some couples
try to guess what my photo is ( it is a male version of a certain mare)
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haha just wait for next chapter, she redeems herself ;)
So...Applejack is depressed one moment, then pissed the next...I LIKE THIS APPLEJACK!
I wonder what crazy things she'll do? 
...I feel it in my bones...the shitstorm cometh...
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haha! well i will say that in the next two chapters.....it indeed is a....eh..."shitstorm." ;) be ready to drop your jaws!
why i keep getting alarms that this story is updated? a every time i look there's a unread favorite
Applejack Y U NO like TwiXMac?
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Sorry I've been cleaning up my grammar and improving stuff. :S
Oh thtat sounds like fun. what did she get up to to piss of a dragon?
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Thats explained in a couple chapters to come. This story has 4 more chapters and its done
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Almost done!
thats gonna be sad
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I should also mention the last chapter is an Epilogue, so...
but yeah, I think next chapter is going to make you
(jaw drop) >:)
1534521 gonna be said when tis over. But then again, all good things must end. except chaos. that must carry on.
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haha true. This is my first romantic fanfiction. actually its my first MLP fanfiction period. I am totally planning on making for fanfic though! I'm getting som pretty good ideas....muHAHAHAHAHA
1534592 Have two going on. well one. co writing the other. and about 6 others planned
hope there is more
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there is, give me a day or two to write it
Well, honestly--- no Twilight, no there isn't. You openly admitted you're frustrated that you know nothing about him because he speaks so little. The attraction IS physical.
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...lol yea :3 even i admit that.
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Okay enough with this....Twilight isn't at fault. I'm not going to tell you what is since it is explained later, but she didn't pss off the dragon.
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:3
Next chapter gonna be epic!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Twilight 
why 
She going to die ?
Please tell me she isn't going to die
WHAT?!
