In an attempt to save face, Big Macintosh takes drastic measures to assure his secret stays safe. However, his actions bring forward a whole new set of deceptions that aren't entirely his own.
(This is the sequel to my featured story Darkest Secrets. I highly recomend people go and read that one first if they haven't already, I'm 99% sure you won't understand the context if you don't.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/24691/1/Darkest-Secrets/Darkest-Secrets)
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Oh man, I can't wait to see where this goes.
Oh my
This is really good! 
Why the story got such a bad rating so far, I am completely oblivious to. This is amazing, and you've left us at quite the cliff-hanger I must say!
Eagerly awaiting for more!
Edge Of Thorns - Savatage
Must.Have.MORE!!
.... It that is okay with you.
Aww Ponyfeathers.Another cliff hanger !
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why on earth would somepony downboat this
This is pretty good. I will trade this.
OK cover art for story was like O.O... Read threw got almost to end and was like
... Than realized that there is still a possibility for more. *Clicks favorite button and watch at the same time* Keep it up.
Well, it's off on the same foot as his story but just a slight difference. This time he did commit the crime, the crime of stealing Ms Smartypants. He's already got his next heist all set up. The greatest heist of all time. The stealing of Twilight Sparkles heart.
Don't suppose you could add a chapter instead of a new story? Makes it easier to track things, eh?
Good tale! Good tale! But... I don't know why, but for some reason for half the fic I thought Big Mac's pen name was "Cerulean Skies" (maybe a fake pegasus name), not the name of the novel. Don't know if there's a way to make that clearer or not...
Either way, name or book, it's a great fic! Moar.
this and the previous story are great, *Retrieves Cleaver* Shunk Here have a thumb.
omg, this is wonderful
Well done
Yet another example where the protagonist in a romantic comedy do things that would get them committed or jailed in reality!
Tracking this.
Whew, am I glad that I saw this. I loved the first one. TwiMac is best ship.
I have a feeling that this one's going to be even better!
yesyesyesyes
This is goooood :-D looking forward to the next chapter(s?)
Mac is a tank.
he
jumped out the window like a bwass
Chapter 2 pls
cool bro
Just so you know there are still people looking out for a chapter 2
So let's see you get that second chapter posted.
Good luck with your writing.
Hunter C. Creed
893162 Thanks for letting me know, It definitely is a morale booster when people tell me their waiting on a chapter. I'm still chugging along at it, but I'm also taking a summer physics course and private pilot's license course. Both of these require at least 6 hours a day of attention, and the seventy minute drive out to the airfield doesn't help...
I'll make a blog entry, but it'll still be a while before I get anything out. Sorry for the inconvenience. 
904687 Hey this is free my friend. If I was paying you I would be peeved. But for no charge your providing me with entertainment. I'll wait as long as I need to for a new chapter
Good luck with your pilots license, and of course your physics class. You are a better man than I.
Hunter C. Creed.
Where are the updates?! Where is the Twi and Mac?!
why does every story I like incomplete
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Part 1 of this I was dying. I just found out that there is a part 2 and it is absolutely hilarious. Please for the love of god come out with part 3 soon.
... WHY ISN'T THERE A THIRD PART TO THIS!?
Okay, I DEFINITELY want to see Part 3 come out
Clearly there's only one possible solution here.
Burn everything. Take what you can carry and start a new life in a new nation. Fire will cleanse the past. It is the only way.
Why does this always happen. I once again got sucked in by a good first half that was finished, but then there was a second half that is dead. Not fair, that's plain evil