Through out life we laugh, we cry, we live, we die. When the time comes to give your final goodbye, will you be ready? A great man once said "A dying man needs to die, as a sleepy man needs to sleep, and there comes a time when it is wrong, as well as useless, to resist." And when the time comes to bid adue to your friends/family/lovers will you remember for Auld Lang Syne?
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i cant believe it you made me
keep up the great work
Hey Guys,
Thanks for reading, if you have any input please leave a comment. I hope to get one chapter out a week at the most at the moment, I have a very strenuous workload at school, and the fact that i have to write the story and edit them by myself is cuts into my time greatly.
Anyway, thanks again for reading!
-Mr.Dependable
Music to listen to while reading: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=acxnmaVTlZA
Five stars and tracking.
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It was good. I don't particularly like growing-old-and-dying fics, but I enjoyed yours about as much as I could. Keep it up.
Oh, and a small correction. When you were first describing their kids, you mentioned a male and a female, but latter called them "two fillies". "Filly" is female, "colt" is male.
I was tearing up a little bit the whole time, especially approaching the end. but the song... oh my dear Celestia. that's what started the waterfall.
i will definitely be tracking this.
Didn't cry, haven't since My Little Dashie, but I came close.
like the guy above you were close but dam good story and all i have to say is
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Poor Big Mac.
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Also, what the guy above me posted.
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like the two above me
Ah! Reverse.... Psychology... Taking over...... MUST.... READ...... THE RAINBOW FACTORY!!!
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If you really want to there's a link to the story on the youtube video... it's a song, I highly recommend you don't.
already read the fic but yeah will continue to read your stories
I've only read the first chapter and I'm in tears.
Very effectively written and emotional.
Simply Beautiful...
Truth be told, I hardly ever cry. I didn't cry, but my heart ached. You have done well, good sir.
dude just beautiful writing and setting
cant wait til you make more......tears are forming in my eyes. just keep going man you are master writer.
So sad
Closest I've come to crying over a story in a long time.
That last paragraph sent me on the verge on tears. I can't wait until you make more. These are excellent.
great story but in the paragraph where Rarity starts to talk about candles you have "Iin"
Should auld acquaintance be forgot,
and never brought to mind ?
Should auld acquaintance be forgot,
and auld lang syne
Your story does a great justice to the traditional meaning and love behind the song. Often the hardest lesson to learn is how to accept the loss of someone dear. Twas a lesson I had to learn, and I will not be alone. Everyone needs someone there for them to help them learn. This story perfectly exemplifies that.
Thank you.
~E.C.
cant wait till next week
it was still very good an dont hate on yourself for thinking its choppy. an we are all sorry to hear about your friends. our hearts and prayers go out to you and her family.
Don't beat yourself up on this chapter. I thought it was really good, as well as the rest of the story. You've got a fantastic story going here. Keep up the great work.
So sorry about your friend. I wish I could offer more than my deepest condolences. May you and her family find the strength to keep on going.
im loving the story, for the most part. the only problem i have with it is that, well, i cant read past what you've posted. post. more. please.
but i cant help but worry about pinky
when will there be an update? any idea?
540189 I'm going to be rewriting a LOT of the chapters, so I honestly have no idea. I can give you a rough estimate that chapter 7 will be out shortly after my summer starts, which unfortunately is on July 1.
540960 GAH
This news is sad, but not as sad as this story which is why i love it. i love "feel" stories for some reason. but luck with your duties and i cant wait to see a new update for this fic!
damn it i'm in tears, this is one of the saddest stories i've ever read.......keep up the good work
oh i'm still crying, i thought rarity was also about to die, what with her being dizzy and all. i hope that in future chapters we see that rarity has married spike. and spike gets his own final chapter many, many, many years after the mane 6 all pass on.
no no no no noooo not rarity please
i miss you rarity
oh goodness you had me in tears by raritys goodbye to pinkie.
i'm also sad that Spike and rarity never got together in their lifetime in this story.
i hope you update soon
Well, sir... It seems that you haven't updated this in nearly a year, but I write this to you in the hopes that you will finish your story. I am thoroughly hooked, and would love to see the emotional end to this heart wrenching tale. I was moved to tears so many times reading your story, and I want to see it through to the end. Please don't give up on it, and if you've put it on the back burner, now may be the time to finish it. I'm sure these other readers will agree. I sincerely hope you will finish the story.
This is in the Silent Hill in Equestria group... Why?!