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I have no idea why it all italicized... :twilightangry2:

seriously twi gets murdered.... there's no way i'm reading this... just... no :facehoof:

The hell did I just read?

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a fanfic about revenge and murder? there are the tags for a reason you know...

#5 · Jan 19th, 2012 · · ·

Do the entire pony world a favor and take this piece of crap down. It's not even flagged correctly. It contains both implied rape, and torture. And it's not even flagged as mature? Reported.

142599 whoa whoa whoa hold your horses.... rape? no. im sorry your sick mind took it to that level.... and it IS rated mature... which you obviously overlooked. torture, yes. IT IS RATED MATURE YOU FREAK. and gimmie a break dude. its not like you could write better. fuckin anons. :flutterrage:

144765 i see how that could have been worded better... and this is implied that Celestia has been "warped" by Twilight's death.

Also, the OC killed Twilight mainly to piss off Celestia, yes i do admit that could have been worded better as well. And the death was assumed she eventually just, you know, died right there.

I am considering editing it to smooth it out a bit... Thanks for your input though. It was of great help to me. :twilightsheepish:

Oddly enough, I kinda like it. I mean, there are things that need work, but the concept is pretty good. The implied rape (even though it wasn't) made me laugh hard. It was just, out there.:rainbowlaugh:

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