You were never normal. Your parents tried to shield you, and hide you away. But you were young, confused, fearless. As you grew older, you became smarter, but in a way that would hurt you. No one knew why. You grew stressed, worried, and uptight. Your family, friends, all gone. Your life, was filled with fear.
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Interesting take. Continue please!
Meh. You should continue with the idea because it makes for an interesting plot, but I'm not sure how well this'll turn out
Interesting...now I cannot wait to see how you deal with the other Cutie Mark Crusaders. Please do keep putting up the good work.
Well, this has my attention. It's a nice start and I want to see where you'll take it from here. Although, so far I have the impression this won't have a happy ending...
Now this is interesting. I've never seen a story that tries to make an antagonist sympathetic before by actually placing the reader in the antagonists position.
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150122 yeah me either....
Well, this is interesting! Albeit, not without some errors. Still, this is worth pursuing! Consider me another tracker.
I noticed a few 'teh's present. Maybe running it through a spell checker before uploading it would make it like 21% better or something.
180789 yeah that and a pre-reader would be nice too.
Very interesting. I want to see where this goes.
A pre-reader would definitely help. But the concept is there, so good luck with it.
this is really good! Keep it up.
Good read, and very interesting.
Hrm. Interesting take on the character.