Haven't read it yet but I'll go ahead and favorite it. I'll read it in the morning and leave a comment!

Well this is... depressing.

Favouriting to read later.

>>14972821497282 Did you read all of it?

Filly/Fillies = Young female ponies.

Colt/Colts = Young male ponies.

Braeburn is male, so he would have been a colt when he was younger.

Other than that, good story so far.

>>14974911497491 Oops.  I'll get to fixing that.

Fluttershy leaves to feed Angel, but then returns from an aerial search.

Which is it?

>>14975241497524 How long does it take to feed Angel?  Read the chapter more carefully because it says Fluttershy returns at sundown, which is later.

"Oh, you douche bags!" she cried, doing a facehoof.

LMAOWTF

>>14977101497710 Black Kyurem knew you'd like it!

INB4 FEATURED BOX EXPLODES

seriously, this is epic.

>>14977421497742

*finishes story*

As a victim of bullying and depression, this one really hit home. It's a much more serious problem than people realize.

Excellent work. Have a

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>>14978761497876 Thank you, my friend!  Black Kyurem must admit he too partially suffered from the same thing, but also became a heavy victim of cyberbullying.

Hmm... interesting. I'll read this when I get home from school.

But consider this story to be faved by a fellow author, amigo!

>>14979051497905 Yes, Black Kyurem will consider it favorited.

>>14974791497479 I read it all and it brought me to tears.

I can relate to bulling myself and almost met a simmilar fate if it wern't for my friends and family.

This was a work of art, and deserves much praise.

Ok I like this story a lot.  What makes it good is that anyone can relate to it.  Bullying is a problem and this story does a good job explaining the dangers of bullying but it also shows that there are people there to help and that nobody is alone.

I have to say that this was a very heartfelt story you made. It really hits the point of bullying home.

I was bullied terribly in elementary and middle school, and let me tell you no one should be subjected to that. Hopefully this story can be used as an inspirtion for those who have been or are being bullied.

That was probably the 3rd most sad story I've ever read, number 2 being My Little Dashie, and the number 1 spot being Scootaloo's Mistake.

On a happier note, my sir, this is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read on the internet! You got all the emotions right, the dialogue was wonderful, and, like I said before, was really sad.

Being a bully victim when I was in school, you perfectly captured the pain and tormention I had to go through. Sometimes, I'd even thought about running away or.....suicide. But since then, I've learned to stand up for myself. And sir, you're story was right on with the effects of bullying.

If you wanted my personal rating, here it is: 10,000,000,000,000,000,000 out of 10.

Awesome job!

EDIT: Also, love the Save Derpy scene!

>>15030351503035 And Black Kyurem thanks you!  Hmm, "Scootaloo's Mistake" more sad than "My Little Dashie"...  Black Kyurem must check this out sometime...

If you really want a hit on your emotions, look up the immortal game.  It is DARK MAN, but also a great story, one of the best I've read on the site.  Now back to the fic at hand, I might have kept Diamond Tiara unrepentive myself, but thats just me.  You did a nice job and there were some hard moments in here....poor AJ

>>15038311503831 You know, Black Kyurem did think about keeping Diamond Tiara's heart stiffened, but if Black Kyurem did that, he would have her be sent away to a private school in Fillydelphia for real.  Perhaps if Diamond Tiara is truly an unrelenting bully, unable to learn from mistakes, then that can't be changed.  But make no mistake my friend, this was a truly hard decision for Black Kyurem to make.

it wasn't as sad as i was expecting. Not saying it was bad, though.

>>15084201508420 Every user's opinion is different and every person in this world is different.

Unfortunately, when you make enemies, people remember that.  They don't always care if you're just a stupid kid who doesn't know better.

What this story gives us that is special is that it shows the characters as real with real feelings.  Diamond Tiara isn't a parody but a spiteful, bigoted little girl of the sort that (unfortunately) does exist.  Applejack is a very real, terrified elder sister and the like.  That's what makes this a great bit of writing.

>>15278031527803 Both your comments are quite true.  And isn't bigoted the one reason why Cera was a questionable character in The Land Before Time?  Thank God she changed, though.

That was a good story man

Liked and faved, because this great, manly-tear inducing story doesn't have enough of either.

>>15399801539980 Well, considering what it touches upon, it does deserve a lot more credit where credit is due, yes.

bah! why do you always pick the sappy 'make friends with the bully' junk?

that aint how <yay> works!

>>15771241577124 Sappy, huh?  Well, is this 'Friendship is Magic' or not?  You tell Black Kyurem.

>>15777981577798

the rest is pretty good, its just nobody or nopody  that evil suddenly turns over a new leaf and instanly becomes good.

plus theirs a whole bunch of these that popped up for some reason.

also whos Black Kyuer... whatever?

>>15805641580564 Diamond Tiara may be evil, but she at least has a heart... or maybe she doesn't, Black Kyurem could be mistaken.  You know, if such characters are black and white, that sort of thing could potentially ruin the series itself, could it not?  This is why Black Kyurem created fanfics.  Black Kyurem is taking out his disappointment in the series by writing stuff that should be exemplified.  In other words, series bad.

Black Kyurem is a Pokemon from Black 2/White 2, a fusion created between two Pokemon, Kyurem and Zekrom.  Black Kyurem will be receiving Black 2 as a Christmas gift and he likes the color black, so Black Kyurem picked such a user name.

D'aaaaaaw

"Now that was pretty cute i reckon i would go a bit loopy if mah sister went missin i thank ya kindly for takin the time ta write this here story for mah family well i gotta go fer now hope ta see more but i gotta get back and help Macintosh with the orchard i will cya round sugercube."  

>>16141151614115 Thanks, Applejack!  You may have screwed up a couple of times in the real series, but you're still Black Kyurem's favorite pony.

To be honest there is only thing I find wrong with this story, the idea that Ponyville wouldn't help look for Apple Bloom, something about that rubs me the wrong way and seeming violates one of the big things in herds and social animals, you always protect the young.

Other than that this is a very sad yet sweet story with a heart warming message that all should take to heart.

>>16167801616780 Blame the not helping on Diamond Tiara and her evil antics in "Ponyville Confidential".  Black Kyurem made the mane six quite aware of Ponyville being stubborn and he intentionally put it in there as a result of taking out his disappointment on the episode.

>>16167801616780 Oh, and thanks.

>>16183321618332

I noticed but it still bugs me.

And you're welcome

How do I read these with the pictures on youtube?

>>17158791715879 What do you mean?

What I had in mind is how do I post these on youtube?

>>17249151724915 You want to post Black Kyurem's story on YouTube?!  Well, Black Kyurem isn't sure to be honest.  Posting a fanfiction story on YouTube would take quite a bit of effort with the narratives and pictures and all that.  You might wanna use your imagination, as Black Kyurem really doesn't know much about this.  Maybe some other user does.  Good luck!

Wow, I've read the whole thing. I remembered when I was being teased, they call me names because I was different and have aspergers, so did my boyfriend.

>>17490461749046 You are so brave to say that publicly.  Kudos to you!  You must trust this community.

I just wanna kill Diamond Tiara, when is she ever gonna stop being a fucking asshole?!

>>18279501827950 Unfortunately, probably never.

This is very good, I'm glad someone's finally done an aftermath on Ponyville Confidential (My worst episode).

But there are still a few bits missing here and there, so maybe the next thing you should do is show what Scootaloo & Sweetie Belle went through whilst Apple Bloom was gone: how Ponyville is still falsely mad at them and when the truth is revieled, they desperately try to make it up to them and Scoot gets very bitter, just like in chapter 9.

Just a suggestion.

>>18357531835753 Black Kyurem agrees that "Ponyville Confidential" sucked, but "One Bad Apple" sucked even more.  As for your suggestions, Chapter 4 has a bit of what you proposed regarding Sweetie and Scootaloo at least.

Now, here's Black Kyurem's current most hated episodes:

1.  A Canterlot Wedding

2.  One Bad Apple

3.  Ponyville Confidential

But thank you for your opinions.

>>18366751836675

I agree about One Bad Apple, but at least it was properly redeemed, plus Babs will be back in tomorrow's episode, as will Braeburn.

>>18367931836793 And Apple Bloom's calling Babs her favorite cousin now.  Yes, "One Bad Apple" was "properly redeemed" as you put it, but that didn't exactly stop the entirety of the episode from going downhill and being a waste of time in which the staff decides to tea-bag the CMC for the umpteenth time.  To be honest, Black Kyurem only really saw the final outcome of the episode and even then, the gist left Black Kyurem in a bad mood for a couple of days.  That's how bad Black Kyurem thought the episode was for simply technically not watching it.

>>18373901837390

If that's how you feel, then you should read Consequences – A Bad Apple Comedy of Justice by Stainless Steel Fox on FanFiction.net. It's an alternate take on One Bad Apple, where AJ catches Babs after she wrecked the float.

>>18394091839409 Ooh, maybe Black Kyurem will.

>>18394291839429

Here it is

>>18394331839433 Wahahaha!  Black Kyurem loved it!  Justice is sweet revenge!  ...or, just sweet, really.

This is very inspiring.  It's these kind of stories that kept me from hurting myself.  I thank you for this.

>>18644511864451 In that case, you are most welcome, friend!

I just wanna strangle Diamond Tiara!

>>19788741978874 Of course you do.

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT SON OF A BITCH DIAMOND TIARA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

>>20217382021738 Oh dear.  What part did you read this time?

Manly tears were shed.

This is really good so far! There are just a few minor things I'd like to point out:

1. Appleloosa is one word.

2. It feels slightly awkward to call Braeburn Applejack's cousin; he's Apple Bloom's cousin as well.

3. In several places you said "at Appleloosa." It should be "in Appleloosa."

That being said, I really like this! The characterization is good, and I liked how Silver Spoon was slightly nicer than Diamond Tiara. I'm going to keep reading now.

>>21024742102474 Black Kyurem based the spelling of Appleloosa on an Equestrian map, which apparently had it as two separate words.

Oh, I forgot to mention that I love the pictures at the beginning of each chapter.

>>21049612104961 Thanks!  Black Kyurem tries to pick fitting ones based on fan art.

"She tucked Apple Bloom in by putting a blanket on her."

This is a bit redundant, considering that's what tucking someone in means.

I like how motherly and helpful Celestia was, and I also like the song. I forgot to mention that I really like all the songs you've had so far. ^_^

Anyway, the story's going well!

>>21102512110251 Heh...  Black Kyurem was a bit on the... descriptive side...  Hehe...

I think I like this chapter best so far. ^_^

Poor Derpy and Smiling Princess, too.

Now, I shall read the final chapter!

However, I don't really understand the Discord quote. Maybe I will once I read the rest of the story, though.

>>21026252102625 Oh, okay. Sorry. I thought that was how it was spelled, anyway. Never mind! ^_^

Yay! Nice ending!

>>21154802115480 The Discord quote Black Kyurem put in was a possible hint to the 'fate' of the bullies who tormented Smiling Princess...

>>21155022115502 Glad you like it!

>>21154752115475 As you can see, it's a nod to the two suicide stories of Amanda Todd and Phoebe Prince, both of whom tragically took their own lives due to bullying and cyber-bullying.

Having B.F.F. stand for blank flanks forever. As mean as its use was, I have to admit that was fiendishly clever and pretty in-character for Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon.

On another note, believe it or not, I can actually relate to Applebloom's position as I had similar experiences from the 6th to 7th grade, when my family and I moved between states. While I did not have to worry about getting a cutie mark, I did have other things to worry about at the two different schools I attended for the 6th and 7th grades. While the teachers liked me on account of being a rule-abiding student who did the work, I was not as lucky with a majority of my peers. First, I was the new kid an area where everyone tended to live in the same place for most of their lives and where lots of people already knew each other. Second, I was both an introvert and an individual with an unimposing stature, giving the appearance of an easy target. Third, much Iike Twilight Sparkle, I had interests that were rather different from most other people my age. Additionally, it also did not help that I was part of a cultural group that has still to gain true acceptance in the USA and may also not have been the norm in the area I was attending school in (in fact this minority group has gained the especial attention of polticians lately due to its ever increasing prominence and, in my opinion, seems to be of particular concern to the more xenophobic individuals who would desire nothing more than a homogenous nation). Even though I had dealt with bullying beforehand, it was nothing like the new bullying I was facing in middle school and junior high.

Unlike before, the teachers were hardly intervening. Also, the bullies seemed to get a genuine kick out of mistreating others for the sake of it, regardless of the response, so not even ignoring them deterred them. Additionally, in such an environment I had trouble creating a network of friends that could have helped. Fortunately though, we eventually found a school that had both a strict anti-bullying policy and friendlier students. While I made it through the ordeal I have not been as sociable since, so yes, such experiences CAN have an impact.

>>21247772124777 Ouchies.  At least it sounds like you made it through in one piece.  This story must have hit home, then.

A response to Diamond Tiara:

>>21422122142212 That's the whole reason why Black Kyurem wrote this story.

>>18279501827950 You know your picture totally goes with what your saying

>>21247772124777

Personally I was the oddball. Easy target too. I know what you mean and have an inkling of what you went through. I was lucky in half my day was at a magnet school. Still had crap to put up with. Then moved to another state and managed to make friends... Friends who kept me from getting jumped... Yeah it was a close one where a person of my disposition was in the cultural minority.

I know what getting teased feels like but B.F.F as blank flanks foreverApple Bloom  should have bucked her into next Tuesday

>>23994772399477 Violence wouldn't do justice, now would it?  Besides, didn't Scootaloo do that well enough?

"Well, I finally got to that blank flank didn't I?" She is a spoiled, selfish, brat!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gonna check this awesomeness out!

Dammit Apple Bloom! If I were you, I'd have beaten the SHIT outta Diamond Tiara, one of my fave ponies or not!

DIAMOND FREAKING DAZZLE FREAKING TIARA!!!!! FUCK YOU!!!!

>>25685282568528 Ah, but violence isn't the answer.  Nevertheless, Black Kyurem had the one crusader more likely to do that - Scootaloo.

>>25685592568559 Looks like the rallying begins now!

HELL YEAH!!!!

YAAAAAAAY!!!! HAPPY ENDING!!!!!! This was an awesome story, fucking up my heartstrings like that. And that's rare, since I usually brutally kill things in God of War and will actually laugh while reading Sweet Apple Massacre, Cupcakes, or A Fun Day. Yeah, I'm twisted. Anyways, I give this story 4.5/5!!!!! and a half

Dude, bullying sucks. I have all the signs of classic bullying. This guy did not sweeten up how people affected by bullies actually feel.

Wirthless, unwanted and alone.

I give you   and