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This story is a sequel to Fluttershy Discovers Animal Crackers
Following the horrific events of the Animal Cracker Incident, Pinkie makes gummy bears for Rainbow Dash. Will Fluttershy find out about them and just become even more traumatized?
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Hm...commence read.
Well that was nice and simple.
Strange image of Fluttershy commanding a small army of gummy bears riding animal crackers, or just playing with them, popped into my head.
awesome... just awesome...
Edit: FANTASTICO!!!!!!!!!! *Spanish accent*
>Inb4 featured.
Nopony deceives Fluttershy though...
ART INSPIRED
Y U SO AWESOME
ART INSPIRED
DONT U DARE STAHP
This is good
Love it man. Keep up the good work. Hopefully this one will end up in the box.
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Oh for Celestia and Primus' sake, now you got me thinking about it! Fluttershy commanding an army of gummy bears riding animal crackers to attack the titanic monster know as Angel from destroying her gingerbread castle. Quite a cute image.
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Now for someone to create this in art form.
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I have half a mind to ask someone to write a fan-fic about such things.
But at the same time, if Fluttershy were able to command an army of gummy bears and animal crackers
then that would mean they were alive. I'm sure that would cause trauma for all those that consumed them.
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1491592 Hey! That's what I wanted to say!
A different reaction from Fluttershy? Also the lesson learned thing at the end was nice. Well done.
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Yu no include the letter
seriously, i want to read the princess' letter!
Fluttershy discovers meat
1492171I don't think so.
Coming Soon... Fluttershy learns to make Cupcakes!
That was cute! I was expecting her to freak out when she learned they were gummy bears though.
1492173 why it could be she eats it by accident not knowing what it was
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Fluttershy discovers sweet tarts?
Fluttershy discovers goldfish crackers?
Anyways, cute story!
1492227 Chocolate bunnies, tweets, the list can go on and on... until it gets old.
...Isn't the gelatin in gummy bears made from animal byproducts?
1492290 Nope.
Still, not bad, but could use a bit more touch up. I'll give you a higher score. 7.9/10. There ya go.
1492299 Thanks.
Anytime. I'm always here to analyze a read. Keep it up, and just so you know, the only reason I gave you a small score in the first place was because It was short. ME LIKEY LONG STORIEZ. Don't worry, for a short story, these two are pretty good, and are of very original content. If you sent this in, you may actually get something like it on the actual show, in fact, why not? Send it in! It's a perfect idea!
1492302 Fair enough, apparently they can be made with starch. Dietary pedantry aside, I love these stories. Simple, cute, funny one-shots. Can't see any glaring errors. Have an upvote!
1492315 Thanks.
"Yes! Gummy Bears are made from all natural ingredients. Like gelatin. Which is made from the skin and bones of ponies."
Then again, there's probably a version of gelatin in this world that doesn't require killing sentient creatures, much like parchment.
Nice sequel.
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peeps
1492337 I'm afraid I must delete your comment due to gore. This is rated everyone, so keep the comments clean, please.
1492372 That's what they're called!
Thanks!
Good read!
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I'm following you....
Hey! You did good for a shortie! And no one had to die for animal crackers either!
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That was adorable, well done.
1492463 It could have happened, man.
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1492467 Heh, thanks.
Aw, I was hoping for a sequel! Now, time to write "Rainbow Dash Discovers Skittles"
Brilliant nice
1492442 For what reason may i sak? And how in lunas hooves do you manage to follow me without having it displayed in my profile
Oh god, i got my own personal stalker
I must throw you a PARTAYYYYY 
good
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"Skittles?"
"Skittles"
That would be hilarious!
-Kiryu
1492739 It's possible that I might just do this... But idk if it would be the best course of action...
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Well maybe everyone thinks pinkie chopped RD into bite size pieces but in the end it would all be a misunderstanding
-Kiryu
That was funny and definitely the best way to calm Fluttershy down, I'm just glad the worst case scenario didn't happen. Although how did she still take care of her animals if she was locked up for two months?
good show!
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Genius! Will write... tomorrow or sometime later.