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The Star In Yellow by Blueshift Report

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Deep in the Royal Library is a book. A terrible book that is said to send whoever reads it mad. A book so dangerous that it has to be hidden away and secured with chains to prevent it from ever being opened.

A book which has just been accidently checked out by Spike on behalf of Twilight Sparkle.

The Star In Yellow is rising once more, and only Rainbow Dash and Spike can save ...
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#1 Chapter 2  Posted 19 weeks, 6 days ago  
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Wait, this is up here now? Awesome! One of my favorite stories; glad I can track it with ease now.
#2 Chapter 2  Posted 19 weeks, 6 days ago  
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>>99226

Oh yes, I've been convinced into trying out Fimfic and it is indeed quite snazzy!

Chapter 3 is coming along nicely and will be up very soon (he says!). I'm 8000 words into it, and though I could cut it into 3k chunks for some cheap updates on EqD I'm determined to keep it as one chapter, since this is supposed to be a three-act story, even though the last chapter may end up being longer than the rest put together! :twilightoops:
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#3 Chapter 2  Posted 19 weeks, 6 days ago  
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>>99230  Really? It's almost done? Allow me to celebrate.
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!

I remember reading this when it firs came out on Eqd. This is awesome!
Duplex Fields (guest)
#4 Chapter 2  Posted 19 weeks, 6 days ago  
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That chapter didn't turn how I thought it would.  I am definitely going to keep reading.
#5 Chapter 1  Posted 19 weeks, 6 days ago  
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Yus!  How did I know Twilight would be the sort who compulsively scribbles in the margins?  :twilightblush:
#6 Chapter 2  Posted 19 weeks, 6 days ago  
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>>99230 In the words of the 3rd best pony: Yay.

Looking forward to the conclusion.
#7 Chapter 2  Posted 19 weeks, 6 days ago  
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This is creepy as heck!!! Can't wait for more!
#8 Chapter 2  Posted 19 weeks, 6 days ago  
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This is creepy as heck!!! Can't wait for more!
#9 Chapter 2  Posted 19 weeks, 6 days ago  
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This is creepy as heck!!! Can't wait for more!
#10 Chapter 2  Posted 19 weeks, 6 days ago  
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"a huge creature with the body of a snake but the head and wings of a dragon"

Um.  That would be a dragon, wouldn't it?  A dragon is a huge snake with wings.
#11 Chapter 2  Posted 19 weeks, 6 days ago  
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>>99326

Snakes don't have limbs though. I guess you could say it was a chinese dragon, but they tend to have little limbs too I think, or no wings.
#12 Chapter 1  Posted 19 weeks, 6 days ago  
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Oh Dear, Twilight and Sinister books. This tale looks promising :twilightsmile:
#13 Chapter 2  Posted 19 weeks, 6 days ago  
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Star in Yellow is on Fimfiction! Excellent!
#14 Chapter 2  Posted 19 weeks, 6 days ago  
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w00t w00t! I read this on eqd, glad to see it up on fimfic! looking forward to the final chapter!
#15 Chapter 2  Posted 19 weeks, 6 days ago  
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>>99332
They do have tiny limbs.
Nice! I'm tracking.
(shameless self-promotion) Check out my story, if you would, please.:fluttershysad:
#16 Chapter 2  Posted 19 weeks, 6 days ago  
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GASP! one of my favorite stories! I remember checking your DA page to see if there was an update a few times, loved it then and i love it now!
Hmstrsteve1 (guest)
#17 Chapter 2  Posted 19 weeks, 6 days ago  
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Oh god, twilight what have you done!?!?? End of equestria as we know it. This story needs more flutter shy.  And you said ch 3 had 8000 words? That's crazy! Biggest one I've read was 4000
#18 Chapter 2  Posted 19 weeks, 6 days ago  
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HAIL LORD HAS.... I MEAN HAIL LADY YELLOW STAR
#19 Chapter 3  Posted 19 weeks, 4 days ago  
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But take the blue pill, rarity, and see just how far the rabbit hole goes.

moar.
#20 Chapter 4  Posted 19 weeks, 4 days ago  
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Aaaaaaaaaaaand about 3 minutes after i read the last chapter this pops up.
Dreams DO come true!   :pinkiehappy:
#21 Chapter 4  Posted 19 weeks, 4 days ago  
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>>103383

Thanks!

The reason for that is that I had to cut chapter 3 in half, because if I'd have uploaded 15000 words as one chunk i'd have been strung up! :)
#22 Chapter 4  Posted 19 weeks, 4 days ago  
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Nice reveal at the end. I feel I should have seen it coming, but fair's fair. I didn't.
#23 Chapter 4  Posted 19 weeks, 4 days ago  
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Loved it! All of it! :eeyup: And I agree with what Baree said.
#24 Chapter 1  Posted 19 weeks, 4 days ago  
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based upon what i've read so far, there is enough foreshadowing to hint at the idea that maybe Yellow Star is Celestia...  At least, thats my assumption.  Imma laugh if im right
thepple (guest)
#25 Chapter 3  Posted 19 weeks, 4 days ago  
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pip is forever alone.
#26 Chapter 4  Posted 19 weeks, 4 days ago  
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it was so sad....YET SO GOOD
#27 Chapter 4  Posted 19 weeks, 4 days ago  
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Yay happy ending! I always get nervous reading grim or dark and generally Avoid sad fics all together but I'm glad everything turned out good in the end. Great work I really enjoyed it :pinkiehappy:
#28 Chapter 4  Posted 19 weeks, 3 days ago  
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“I’m the mailmare Rainbow Dash, not you! Try doing your own job for once, you... you...

..DOUBLE NIGGER..'
#29 Chapter 4  Posted 19 weeks, 3 days ago  
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Excellent ending I had a feeling it was Celly's book. Loved it.
#30 Chapter 4  Posted 19 weeks, 3 days ago  
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Aw man, I really thought that this was leading up to a confrontation between Yellowstar and Dainbow Rash.
#31 Chapter 2  Posted 19 weeks, 3 days ago  
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As I'm reading the last bit of Chapter 2, "For the Reunion" from the Final Fantasy VII: Advent Children soundtrack starts playing.  A more appropriate musical accompaniment could not have existed, that was creepy and terrifying.
#32 Chapter 4  Posted 19 weeks, 1 day ago  
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and then there was manly tears

#33 Chapter 3  Posted 18 weeks, 6 days ago  
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This is supposed to be a seriously stressful situation in a surreal story
Yet this chapter was hilarious :pinkiecrazy:
#34 Chapter 4  Posted 18 weeks, 6 days ago  
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Wow, this was something else :rainbowhuh:
Good show, jolly good show :eeyup:
#35 Chapter 2  Posted 18 weeks, 6 days ago  
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"Of course Twilight Sparkle my most faithful friend. I always save the day."

And then Yellowstar was Jesus.
#36 Chapter 4  Posted 18 weeks, 6 days ago  
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The metalogics of it all is pretty interesting, modulated by how simple their manner of speaking is.

good prize.
Ezn
#37 Chapter 4  Posted 18 weeks, 1 day ago  
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Loved this. It was dark, but still kept so much of the show's atmosphere. It was well-written, you spelt colour with a "u", it had some scary moments and I read it all in one sitting. Faved.

Also, gonna check out The King In Yellow
http://www.gutenberg.org/ebooks/8492
#38 Chapter 3  Posted 18 weeks, 9 hours ago  
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This is the one time I'll ever be full of anticipation and laughing my head off at the same time! :rainbowlaugh:
#39 Chapter 4  Posted 18 weeks, 9 hours ago  
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>>126004

Hurrah!

Yes it's important to spell words correctly! For Queen and country, pip pip!

The actual book 'The King In Yellow' is very strange but also very good. Don't go in expecting a detailed plot though, it's more about atmosphere than anything else.
ProBrony (guest)
#40 Chapter 1  Posted 17 weeks, 4 days ago  
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So this is probably the best-written fan fic I've read in years.  
ProBrony (guest)
#41 Chapter 3  Posted 17 weeks, 4 days ago  
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The humor in this story has been top notch throughout.  It all feels like humor that would be in the actual show, and I laughed out loud once at one of the jokes.
ProBrony (guest)
#42 Chapter 4  Posted 17 weeks, 4 days ago  
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Amazing.  It was like an episode of the show.  5/5
#43 Chapter 4  Posted 14 weeks, 4 days ago  
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Awesome story, But as I was reading I was wandering, What if Celestia Wrote a clopfic?
:P
#44 Chapter 4  Posted 14 weeks, 4 days ago  
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>>193556

That's the racy continental adaption!
#45 Chapter 1  Posted 11 weeks, 6 days ago  
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Damnit to hell Blueshift; every time I open one of your stories I find myself unable to stop until it's over. So now, not only am I reading fan fiction at 2 in the morning, but I'm also really creeped out and probably won't be able to sleep even once I'm done. :trixieshiftleft: Why are you so awesome?!
#46 Chapter 4  Posted 11 weeks, 6 days ago  
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>>193556
That was the ending Twilight never got to read. :trollestia:

But as for the story, I... I think it surpassed Fallout:Equestria. And I LOVE Fallout:Equestria. I mean... and the reveal... and that means Silver Crescent was... oh man I have to go distract myself from all this awesome.
#47 Chapter 4  Posted 11 weeks, 6 days ago  
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>>257345

Thanks, it is comments like these that make me grin ear to ear and inspire me to keep writing! I do think this is easily my best story so far, it's just a shame that it hasn't got the same sort of buzz from the fandom as some of my other, shorter, sillier ones. Tell your family and friends! (Well, maybe not your family. "Mum, mum, you have to read this My Little Pony fanfiction!")
#48 Chapter 4  Posted 11 weeks, 3 days ago  
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I stayed up until half six in the morning reading this and it's totally worth the lack of sleep. This is a very well-written story, the characters were "realistic" and, even though it's tagged as Dark, it made me laugh. A lot. The ending was bittersweet; kinda sad that Yellowstar, who wanted to make everyone happy, only got the chance to do one act of kindness (saving Twilight) before Twilight accidentally killed her (although it sounds harsh when it's put that way), but she still got her own happy ending. An apology probably would've been nice as well, though.

So yeah, favourited and I'm looking forwards to reading the rest of your fics.
#49 Chapter 4  Posted 10 weeks, 1 day ago  
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This story is like the realtimes story. In our fantasy all things that become wrighting in books, here or anwere can be real. You have done a grait job.
#50 Chapter 4  Posted 9 weeks, 1 day ago  
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Content: :yay: This is brilliant, there's nothing else I can say about it.
Effectiveness: :rainbowlaugh::raritycry: I love stories that can make you burst out laughing and bring you to tears. There is so much emotion in this, and it really pays off.
Memorabilia: :yay: Seriously. It's these sorts of fanfics that made me fall in love with MLP, and it's these sorts of fanfics that are probably going to stay with me forever.
Continuity: :pinkiehappy: You really dug into the fandom here, especially with a certain character's history. Dash burning books -again-? I'm gonna have to guess that's a reference to -something- so go you!
Overall: :raritystarry:

Have all my yays... ALL OF THEM!
:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:
#51 Chapter 4  Posted 8 weeks, 4 days ago  
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Excellent story.

Injecting some humor into it with Dash and Spike maintained the feel of the show while Twilight descended into madness and doom, and the twist ending made for a satisfying conclusion.

+1 quality twist ending for making it unexpected, yet if you look back over the story you can still say "oh yeah, that makes complete sense!".
#52 Chapter 4  Posted 7 weeks, 8 hours ago  
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this story is the one to never put down!
#53 Chapter 4  Posted 5 weeks, 7 hours ago  
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>>99230
Yay! tSiY is on on FimFiction! I finally have a reason to actually read it! :derpytongue2:
#54 Chapter 4  Posted 5 weeks, 4 hours ago  
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I know I'm like three months late in reading this, but I was sent here by reading a blog from a clopfic author. Very, very relevant. Anyway, this fic receives nothing but praise from me.

I have to say, the personalizations were done very well. Perhaps Rainbow Dash's brashness could be toned down a bit, but it's nothing big. Silver Crescent and Yellowstar were done in a way that's oddly simplistic to the point where it could almost be seen as scary, which is a good thing. Saddle Stitch however, was by far, my favorite of your characterizations. I loved his sarcastic attitude, and he generally added a new look to the type of pony which isn't often done well in other works.

The plot was great, and even a dumbed down and severely shortened overview would at least spark some sort of thought. Concerning the twist ending, it really gets you thinking, maybe making some connections of your own. I can honestly say, I haven't really felt that way from literature before.

I'm probably rambling though, so I guess it should be pretty self-explanatory why I'm saying all this. Oh, and the references were numerous, and great. Pretty humorous, yet somehow not detracting from the serious tone of the story. They were all okay, but the one reference that Princess Celestia made... Genius.

#55 Chapter 2  Posted 4 weeks, 4 days ago  
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When the old librarian started blaming Spike for everything I was rollin'. Thanks for this excellent story.
#56 Chapter 4  Posted 4 weeks, 4 days ago  
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:rainbowhuh:
:pinkiehappy:
:rainbowlaugh:
:fluttershysad:
:raritydespair:
:applecry:

This story has bowled me over. It's one of my favorite fanfictions ever, no joke, and I'm honestly shocked it's not more popular. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to read it again to mull over all the things I missed the first time!
#57 Chapter 4  Posted 3 weeks, 5 days ago  
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nice story but lyra is hungry so seea
#58 Chapter 4  Posted 3 weeks, 4 days ago  
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while this story was mildly hard to read, due to words of a more advanced nature, of a kind, witch i need help understanding
it was definitely worth my time, haveing to bang my head against the "trusty helping tools", once or twice a chapter

if fimfiction was a confectioner and the storys are the "fancy cakes", this one would be one my 3 favourites :moustache:
#59 Chapter 3  Posted 3 weeks, 1 day ago  
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Oh poor Pipsqueak! :rainbowlaugh:
#60 Chapter 4  Posted 2 weeks, 6 days ago  
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This was an awesome and epic read! I loved every minute of it, and I really liked the ending!
That said, I was expecting Cthulu mythos attack, but oh well.
At least there was a happy ending. ;)
#61 Chapter 2  Posted 2 weeks, 4 days ago  
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I must say I love how you make Spike the "slave" XD
#62 Chapter 4  Posted 2 weeks, 4 days ago  
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>>512451

Thanks! Glad you liked it! I like to subvert reader expectations - the reader knows the normal story tropes, so I find it more interesting to go a different way.
#63 Chapter 4  Posted 2 weeks, 4 days ago  
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>>524005

For some reason in every Twi/Spike fic I do, Spike is constantly extra-put upon by bossy Twilight, who doesn't realise that she needs him more than he needs her.

:twilightsheepish:
#64 Chapter 4  Posted 2 weeks, 4 days ago  
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>>524066 I was thinking more about Saddle sticks "It is mine - Hrm - SPikes Fault! All of it!" Parts XD They are hillarius, and really gives the story the dot above the i, so to say ;)
#65 Chapter 4  Posted 2 weeks, 4 days ago  
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>>524061
Ah, it's alright. It just wasn't what I was expecting, is all. Was hopinf for a grimdark, to be totally honest :twilightsheepish:
But oh well, stilla worthwhile story :twilightsmile:
#66 Chapter 3  Posted 2 weeks, 4 days ago  
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“SCOOTALOO! Of course! The main character is Scootaloo!”


Linkie linkie
#67 Chapter 4  Posted 2 weeks, 4 days ago  
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Okay, now when I have read the whole thing:

This story had everything

Everything that makes a story good.

It was:

Funny, thoughtful, mysterius, adventures, exciting, nerve-breaking, sadness, well written, intelligent story, emotional...

Do you know how many hearts I give this?

:heart:

This masterpiece is equal to My little dashie, if not better! Very, very well done!
#68 Chapter 4  Posted 2 weeks, 4 days ago  
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>>524418

Thanks, glad you liked it! :twilightsheepish:
#69 Chapter 4  Posted 2 weeks, 3 days ago  
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Oh dear... I've lost count of how many times I've said that... at around 240 roughly.  Though, I did say "Oh dear!" int he context of loving it eight times right at “Before Princess Celestia finds out what?” :pinkiehappy:

Though... the story i read right before this was "The End of Ponies"... so my heart just broke when Rainbow Dash said that the main character was Scootaloo   :fluttercry:

And the only thing worse for Saddle Stitch that I can think of, is if he is given the position that Mr. and Mrs. Cake believe he holds... you know the one with that special spot built for two? :trollestia:

Also:  "A... butterfly?"  "What! WHERE!":rainbowlaugh:

I would give you all of my yays, but that would break the limit by a good few thousand
so I'll have to give you just 15 for now, and hope the remaining are delivered to you by a certain wall-eyed postmare :derpytongue2:
:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:
#70 Chapter 1  Posted 1 week, 1 day ago  
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Oh, surprise, surprise.  The book is ridiculously enthralling to Twi because it's EVIL!
#71 Chapter 1  Posted 1 week, 1 day ago  
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Excellent start.
#72 Chapter 4  Posted 1 week, 1 day ago  
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>>573372

Well... :twilightoops:
#73 Chapter 2  Posted 1 week, 1 day ago  
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And then Yellowstar's lovely mother fell asleep. - This line and the bit of the story that came after literally gave me chills.

The Sweetie Belle part is hilarious.
#74 Chapter 3  Posted 1 week, 1 day ago  
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Poor Pipsqueak, poor Scootaloo.
#75 Chapter 4  Posted 1 week, 1 day ago  
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Alright, excellent story with a great ending. I am glad I finally got around to reading this.

Dash was both ridiculous and ridiculously awesome, and Yellowstar's choice at the end was very touching.

5 stars and 2 thumbs up, and entry into my user page wall of epic stories.
#76 Chapter 4  Posted 1 week, 12 hours ago  
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I think what really makes this is that the first half of the first chapter could have been a straight-up comedy fic. And all around the mind-wrenching horror engulfing Twilight and those closest to her, the day-to-day fun and amusing shenanigans of ponyville are still occurring unawares throughout the story. It accentuates the horror and gives the threat depth, while providing laughs that make the reader clap their hand over their mouth. Brilliant.
#77 Chapter 4  Posted 1 week, 10 hours ago  
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>>577209

Thanks, I do really enjoy the strange tonal dissonance between comedy and darkness. And it's always been said that there's only a thin line between comedy and tragedy.
#78 Chapter 1  Posted 3 days, 3 hours ago  
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You know, more than a few people have described the beginning of their bronyism similar to the way Twilight experiences getting sucked into that book. :rainbowderp:

Uh oh. :pinkiecrazy:
#79 Chapter 2  Posted 3 days, 2 hours ago  
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This is great so far. I should probably be in bed by now, but I have a hunch this is going to keep me up late.

One of the things I like about this chapter is how you've managed to inject a healthy amount of meta-commentary about fiction in general -- and brony fan fiction in particular -- without bogging the story down. It adds an amusing extra level to things, and provides a little relief in some of the more intensely creepy moments. :twilightsmile:
#80 Chapter 1  Posted 2 days, 17 hours ago  
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So Twilight was sucked into the book just like Silver Cresent...
#81 Chapter 2  Posted 2 days, 15 hours ago  
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"As they did so, a small white filly with a mound of curly purple hair trotted past them into the library clutching a letter in her mouth, and then trotted straight back out sans letter, her head caked in soot."

Freaking genius.

This story is so well written. The comedy still manages to make me laugh, even amidst the genuinely terrifying eldritch events that are happening.
#82 Chapter 4  Posted 2 days, 14 hours ago  
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The tonal shifts in the last two chapters between comedy and psychological horror seemed jarring to me, but from the other comments it looks like I'm in the minority in finding it strange. On the whole, still a very good story. I'll definitely be recommending it to others.

I saw the parallels between Yellowstar & Silver Crescent and Celestia & Luna early on, but thought that the book was just molding itself and its story into something comfortingly familiar for its reader. Like maybe if Dash were the reader, Yellowstar would've been a daring stunt flier. I didn't see the real nature of the book coming, which was nice.

Now that we've seen bits of Yellowstar's story of how things felt, it might make an interesting follow-up to read Blueshift's story of what really happened to inspire those feelings. There's a lot of material here for an interesting story of ancient Equestria. A widowed god who must cope with his wife's death, fight off an eldritch abomination, and parent two powerfully magical daughters who seem to have gone from best friends to worst enemies recently for reasons he doesn't understand. I'd read the hell out of that. :twilightsmile:

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