Twilight finds a spell that will allow her to take a vacation into a different world. But there is always a consequence to travel into an alternate world. She and her friends find out some valuable lessons, along with making an unlikely friend that isn't all what he seems.
AH i spy a NEW story! oh this is gonna be good
I like this story
It's Furstreak. You know its good.
Please please please be alright.
"Just don't burn down the house"
WIN!
Pacing seems rather quick, at least to me. Although AJ being a farm pony in all she I guess makes her non prudish.
1467351 The pacing is a little quick. But I don't plan on dragging this story out like my main story.
Well that was interesting.
"Just don't burn the house down"...
What have you done?!
That is SO gonna bite you in the ass!
Well, look at that. The house isn't burned down. You have successfully destroyed logic.
Waiting impatiently for updates!
1476834 no updates tip Tuesday sorry to say. I'm out of town and only have my iPod to make comments with for the moment. I should resume writing tomorrow though
1476921 Okay...
hmm...cliche, was hoping they'd live out until the spell ended and then return then have an accident. but if you handle this right, it should work fairly.
1494088 It shall work out. I had planned on making it more subtle than this and making it a little longer, but I honestly don't have the time right now. I would have to put the story on hiatus.
That had me choked up. Bravo!
Are you planning a sequel?
1499025 not to sure just yet.
: moustache:
Rated five out of five moustaches.
everyone talkin' sequels already? The first one just started!
1500631 Dah first one be complete as well
This story can't just end here! I demands MOAR!!!!!
Uh, if that's ok.
1500891
Furstreak,
Y U NO WRITE MORE?!
1595284 This story is complete
Good story, I like how you ended it. simple, clean, and full of possibilities
1595335
aww but it was sooooooo gooooood.....
cool story by the way!