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Dusty Sage 588740

Joined June 2012
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    Dusty Sage's Stories (5)

    • The Sparkle Chronicles
      Okay, so the girl of your dreams turns out to be a pony. Now what?

      18,589 words · 1,364 views · 58 likes · 5 dislikes
    • Somepony New
      New home, new life, new species. Now things start to get complicated.
      9,391 words · 518 views · 34 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Dead Pony Flying
      Rainbow Dash is scheduled for the Long Black Train, but first she has some flying to do.
      2,071 words · 422 views · 23 likes · 1 dislikes
    • The way she used to be
      You never forget your first crush.
      10,603 words · 276 views · 26 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Second Act
      12,378 words · 690 views · 30 likes · 10 dislikes
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    They came from different worlds, but they were determined to be together, one way or another.  This is the path they chose.

    (This is the second story in the TwiBrush series, beginning with The Sparkle Chronicles and continuing through Somepony New.  Cover art commissioned from Jada.)

    First Published
    10th Oct 2012
    Last Modified
    21st Oct 2012

    Comments ( 9 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 3d ago · · ·
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    I honestly did read your story Sparkle Chronicles and I have only read I think the first chapter of "Somepony New" so to find the transition of the two is actually kind of sweet. I never commented on a story before so you'd be the first one I ever did comment on. Thanks for the saga.. trilogy? Whatever, when your done you'll know what you got. Hope to see more of you in action, later.

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Oh, Celestia . . . :twilightsmile:

    Thank you for adding this. It smoothed out the transition between your other two works, practically seamlessly. If there were any faults, they evaded my searching eye.

    Kudos to you, friend!

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 3d ago · · ·
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    There are at least two more chapters in the works here, so don't touch that dial.

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Yes! It's finally here! I'll have to read it proper when I get home tonight after work, but... am I excited about a prequel to Somepony New? Heck yes.

    LIFE = HAPPY!

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1419637

    That's what we need around here: enthusiasm.  (And a few more greenish thumbs, inasmuch as the red ones are out swarming today.  On t'other hoof, one poor soul got hit with almost 150 downs today, so ignore anything I whine about.)

    Chapter 2 is done, except for the One Last Editing Pass, and I'm about 500 words into Chapter 3.

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Did I mention One Last Editing Pass?  It's going to take a little longer than that.  I found a plot hole the size of Ghastly Gorge, and of course I berated myself for being a plothole and not seeing it.  (Language extensions, how do they work?)

    I am trying, meanwhile, to persuade myself that I haven't already reached Peak Tale and it's all downhill from here.  This endeavor is proving somewhat less successful.

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 32w, 17h ago · · ·
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    I trust the good doctor has the Midas touch?

    (Sorry, I had to say it. The pun universe throws you a softball and you're required to hit it)

    #8 · Chapter 2 · 32w, 16h ago · · ·
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    >>1431431

    I went to a whole lot of trouble to explain that, then cut it for being (1) unnecessary since everybody got the joke and (2) unfunny.

    Okay, more (2) than (1). :twilightsheepish:

    #9 · Chapter 4 · 30w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Okay, it's done.  It ends the night before Somepony New begins.  That's about as close as I can get it without digging into Lyra's background.   And to be honest, I thought about ending it after Chapter 3, which despite the pseudoscience lesson ended almost poignantly, but as is often the case, the characters had some more to say, and there were a couple more we hadn't heard from yet.

    Forty thousand, three hundred fifty-eight words of a dubious ship.  With an OC, yet.  I'm glad I got it out of my system and on to the screen.

    I here admit that I had an idea for a meta-tale, in which Twi reads this mess and casts some horrid spell on me for my effrontery.  I am not, however, about to write it.

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