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After the Straw Hat's battle against Admiral Kizaru and Bartholomew Kuma, Kuma realized he made a large mistake. Instead of "pushing" the Straw Hats to their designated location as he planned, he managed to send them to a completely different world. A world known as Equestria, where the World Government recently made contact with and kept hidden to the public. The World Government had plans with this world full of colorful ponies, however that is until Luffy and his crew begin to wreak havoc all over Equestria.

How will the Straw Hats, who are now ponies, come to adapt to this new life...?

Authors Note:
This is based off of the anime, One Piece, and this story begins during episode 408. It might be confusing if you haven't watched the anime, and of course, I recommend that you people go watch it! It's an amazing show! Anyways this is my very first fan-fic and something I've been planning on writing for awhile now, so please give me some constructive criticism! One Piece was a huge inspiration for me before My Little Pony, so I thought how about we do a little crossover on this...? Anyways, One Piece and MLP? That's going to be one hell of a challenge.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 40 )

Oh god... If this turns out good, I may just be required to worship the ground you walk upon.

i wonder how luffy will react to not being able to eat meet anymore :derpyderp1:

1429106

Yeah... that's exactly what I'm wondering too...

anyone have dejavu? I have dejavu

1441191 That would suck for RD!
But it would be SO AWSOME!

1441191 Maybe even Gear 3rd? Wait can he even do that?

1450394 you do know this is luffy you are talking about?

1453078 Yeah, course I do. What I'm sayin' is that as a rubber-HUMAN he bites his thumb and inflates it that way...

How will that work as a FINGER/THUMB-LESS pony?!

1429106 God help us all :rainbowderp:

1455363

He can probably just bite on his hooves, ya' know :twilightsheepish:

1471163 Well, yeah guess that could work but won't it a) hurt and b) be kinda awkward?

1472995

Uh... well this is Luffy were talking about. Nothing is awkward for him. He also nearly got killed by poison and went into the middle of a war just after that.

1474973 Oh, right... Sorry, I'm a relatively new brony, so I haven't quite learned to not question these things... especially Pinkie...

Okay, I know this is me just being frickin irritating but HOW is he picking his nose with a HOOF?! GAH! Sue me for being a realistic person, but... oh wait, his face can stretch *facepalm*

Nothing is awkward for Luffy. :facehoof: Proof:

I love One Piece. I can't wait til the next chapter.

GOD **** MOTHER****ING PIECE OF **** WITH A *** ON A **** SANDWITCH WITH A SIDE HELPING OF ****
AND A QUARTER OF *****!!!

*sigh* dang man i was hoping you would continue this. o well maybe next fic i guess Y.Y

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Yeah I apologize for this... inconvenience. I had no clue what to write next. But hey, look at the bright side! I'm going to be going to your house and I'm bringing Pinkie! :pinkiehappy:

Also more fics for me to work on! :pinkiecrazy:

I get it if ya feal this is right thing ta do then i understand.

Please insert the seven words you can't say on television:fluttercry:....Can i hug pinkie? We'll play some Smash bros....wait...why are you in texas? How do you know where i live?!? OH CRAP!

Darn.....What you expected me to rage or something. Well too damn bad.

well.....this makes me and fluttershy sad :fluttercry:

At least it was nice until it lasted :ajsleepy:

I think I might try writing it. Also I think I might have just missed you because I'm going to YOUR house.

OI! Now I've got ya attention... Chill, mate. Writers Block happens to everyone and NOTHING is more annoying then trying to find the right way to continue. Also, you don't need to apologize for having problems, nor being busy with 'em - they happen no matter what you do. Pretty awesome of you to do it still though.

As to the story, sometimes the BEST plot, is an accidental one - do a bit of chapter drafting, throw some random elements (Not Harmony, for any wannabe smartarses) in there and tweak till it seems good. Though, that may not work for you... I dunno, just giving tips here.

I don't see a lotta One Piece crossovers, but yours has two good things that I've seen in only two now - grammar, sentence structure and keeping true to characters. Okay, make that THREE things.

Good luck writing.

Aww, sad to see this come to a close. Hopefully you get inspiration for something sometime soon ^-^ I guess I'll have to find another good One Piece crossover now. :(

1479104 lol every facepalm in the world is amazing. I am the ruler of facepalms! (yes that includes facegrounds:facehoof:)
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This story was a great inspiration to me. I shall pay my respects, for this had aided in my success for my own story.
Thank you for the good times, even if it was short! :twilightsmile:

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo it so short

ug rainbow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111:trixieshiftright::pinkiegasp:

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