A young filly by the name of Scarlet Sky is mysteriously born from the light of a red moon. With her new birth she was left to live in Ponyville's orphanage. With now family or knowledge of who she is and how she came to be here she strives to learn the truth of her strange birth, and why she feels that something is missing inside of her.
But what the greatest mystery of it all... is the curse that is placed on Scarlet Sky... the curse that even she herself does not know about.
Note: I will be using my own artwork for all of these stories unless it is stated other wise, which I will credit the original artiest upon use.
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Cool, but you're really confusing me. Is Fluttershy a filly in school with Scarlet?
Good, but confusing.
1428566 THIS!
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They are both fillies. yes. sorry for the confusion. Had a friend read it and he's going to help me edit it. I didn't know that i had some gramatical errors it.
That's what I get for not reading it a few times before posting it. ^^
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Tis not an edgy name. It's more elegant than edgy, or that's what it's meant to be. ^^;
But thank you! I'm excited about my story. I really have a lot in mind for this. I have someone doing music for me too! lol
1428566 She's not black btw. She's a dark gay. ;D
i like the concept very much and you are very good with detail but...
How do they know Scarlet's name if there was a phasing of time you didn't specify other then that great so far
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Thank you for asking that! I just read over it! I'll be adding that little detail in right now. I'm very sorry for the confusion. ^^
it's fine just a little edit here and there if i didn't then the problem would ensue
I wish people would comment on my story Just an post telling me if im doing okay or what to fix
but look at me whining about my story on someone else's story god i'm so pathetic
i need to shut up
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I appreciate the help! I don't mind people asking questions and pointing things out. That means I'm just able to go back and fix them to make the story more enjoyable to those who prefer proper grammar and all of that good stuff! : D
Please don't worry. You're not pathetic at all. I'm just glad that you were didn't just assume I was stupid and instead asked me first. ^^ *hugs*
Yep I guess I'm kinda confused about that last part though
(I'm glad you were didn't just assume? ) what exactly do you mean by that
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lol sorry.
I was thinking one thing and typing another.
I meant to say
"I'm just glad that you were nice and didn't just assume......" ^^;
I didn't assume I saw there was a problem and pointed it out
I'm not mad even though it might come off as that
I'd hate to ask but could you maybe read my story
I hare to ask I just need to know if I've got any errors
Um, why is this in the "Past Sins" group when Nyx from "Past Sins" isn't even mentioned?
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I was just wondering that myself.