Last Day With Mom

Applejack is one excited little filly as she gets to spend the whole day with her mom.
No housework, no buckin' apples and best of all...no boys allowed!

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Frazikar

Frazikar #1 · March 27th · · ·

Nice, the only thing missing would be Buttercup checking on Apple Bloom before retiring ...

Ms Rarity

Ms Rarity #2 · March 27th · · ·

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Hi darling!
Thank you for letting me know. I seem to have messed up during the final edit.

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DrawingMyth

DrawingMyth #3 · March 27th · 1 · ·

You made me CRY

Perpetually Confused

Perpetually Confused #4 · March 27th · 1 · ·

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Twilights secret stash #5 · March 27th · 1 · ·

I would just like to say thank you for taking the time to write this very touching story.
I cried so much .

Starswirl the Beardless

Starswirl the Beardless #6 · 3 weeks ago · · ·

This was an incredibly sweet story. I'm almost tempted to say it was a bit too sweet, bordering on sappy, but I have a bit of a sweet tooth in that regard. The story wasn't aiming high, but it didn't need to, and accomplished what it set out to do. Unfortunately, the story has a large number of mechanical errors (grammar, punctuation, formatting) throughout that make it a bit difficult to read. If this had gotten some more proofreading, I think this could have been a much better story.

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