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Walking home from work one night, I encounter a lost pony sitting cold and alone in the local play park.
I can't just leave her there in the rain on valentine's day

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Hi Ms Rarity, I've just finished reading this and I think it's a really good concept of my original story and the way you've kept it short and sweet.
It's a nice little twist to the tale on how Mark actually wakes up in Ponyville, as the red string of fate has intertwined him.
I wasn't to sure about your idea of the space time continuum when you first came to me with your idea, but I'm pleased you changed my mind!

Keep up the good work!!
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Hey there darling!

Thank you! I'm so happy you like it. I've been enjoying the Power of Three so much, reading of Sweetie Belle and Mark's plight and such like so much that I thought I'd give a little hearts and hooves day shout out to them. :twilightsmile:

I'm quite nervous but excited at the same time to find out how your story will end, you have me in suspense darling! :rainbowlaugh:

I'm so pleased you've enjoyed my concept of your wonderful idea.
:raritystarry:

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