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Galloruidoso


A shared account between two friends for stories we don't want on our main accounts.

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Most of this story was written in a manic haze

Also how I write my stuff as well. It's worked so far :pinkiecrazy:.

“Sure Scoots, that sounds good to me, defiantly more comfortable than the futon.”

Defiantly is not the word you wanted to use here.

"it meant Rainbow DEFIANTLY saw Scootaloo as a sister, and would think she was weird."

ok, that's twice now. I thought the other one might have been a typo, but do you genuinely not know the difference between "defiantly" and "definitely?"

Also,

“Huh, I’ve heard of ponies chasing a purple dragon but this is ridiculous,”
... what? What does this mean?

The "I've heard of X but this is ridiculous" format of sentence only works when something is happening that is similar to a phrase that MEANS something else, or has a double meaning.
Like, if there was someone spanking a monkey, someone could say "I've heard of spanking the monkey, but this is ridiculous."
It's a way to point out a pun, not just "this is literally a thing that is happening right now."

"Use your wings as little as possible, and defiantly don’t try any crazy stunts for at least a month. I would try to tell you to never try anything stupid."

Ok, strike 3, I HAVE to assume you do not know the difference between these two words.

Allow me to spell it out for you.

Defiantly -- reacting to someone with defiance. i.e. "She told her daughter to go to bed, but her daughter yelled defiantly, "but I'm not tired!"

Definitely -- Certainly, absolutely. The word you are probably INTENDING to put, but you keep putting in Defiantly instead, in DEFIANCE of common sense, since it's the wrong word

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Thanks for catching that bruh. Big preache :moustache:

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Okay, cool, looks like I have a favorite word to misspell. I'll be sure to rely on something more than the FIMFiction site spelling and grammar error detector.

Also, If you don't understand the reference, then I guess it went over your head. If you don't agree its a legitimate pun/joke, whateves. But I tend to use lots of inside jokes and obscure references only my friends would catch or people who have read the same stories as me. Then there's some stuff like "chasing the purple dragon" that apparently people like you don't get. It's cool, especially since it's a reference to something people say about drug addicts, so good on you for not getting that. Legit, I regret a lot of shit I've done and or know about. I guess that goes along with the "cursed knowledge" a bit, but I digress. I'll be sure to fix the spelling errors one of these days, but it's a low priority atm.

I got more projects I'm working on and this was mostly intended as a gift to a friend. I just also entered it into a competition for the hell of it. But hey, if you ever get around to writing your own story, I'll be sure to let you know if I find any issues. Proof reading is hella valuable and appreciated.

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Random question, you ever write like 5k words in one sitting while on LSD? It's a trip man. Also, I haven't been in a high school English class in a long ass time.

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All edits have been made now that I got some time and motivation to do so. Lemme know if I mess up any other odd spellings.

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