• Published 4th Nov 2012
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Blooded Hooves of Twilight - Shadowed Rainbow



When nightmarish creatures called the Blanks and the Bloody Hooves become reality, Twilight must come to terms with the terrifying fact that some campfire stories aren't just fables.

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Yes, the repetition of "Kill on sight" was a shout out to The Silence from Doctor Who.:pinkiecrazy: Yes, you will get some Evil!Scootaloo fun.:scootangel:

So yeah, hope you enjoyed the chapter!... yay for psychological zombification struggles!:pinkiecrazy::scootangel::twilightsmile:

Once again, special thanks to Rex Ivan, my editor for the story, since he's helped make it a little better than my initial draft - hopefully I'll be able to get new chapters out sooner since my summer break has begun.:twilightsmile:

2562118 Lol, that about sums up the end of chapter 2!:rainbowlaugh::pinkiecrazy:

You must finish the next chapter! This is a very good story.

2562176 Thanks!:twilightsmile: Well I definitely plan to finish the next chapter - it'll be some backstory time!:pinkiecrazy:

2562206

An idea on when it's going to be finished?

new kind of sight. Mine kind of allows me

That doesn't sound quite right

Also, I think I've figured out how all this happened to Twi. Scootaloo implanted an overpowering fear in her mind, causing her to attempt to disprove it subconsciously without even realizing it, ultimately resulting in her death. In any case it truly shows what fear can do to ones mind.

I was incredibly surprised when i saw this updated, cant wait for more:pinkiehappy:

2562228 Oh, thanks, I'll fix that.:twilightsmile: And that is actually a very logical assumption.:twilightsmile::scootangel:

2562752 *in creepy whispering voice* It's always the band camps...:pinkiecrazy:

Could it really be? Bloody Hooves updated!:pinkiehappy:
I was just thinking about our favorite patchwork Unicorn yesterday :twilightsmile: At least now she and miss Smarty pants have something in common, both of them are made with mismatched parts :pinkiecrazy:

Anyway, poor Twilight. Life's hard for a meatpuppet. But at least she's got Scoots to show her the ropes :scootangel:

2562969 I didn't even think about that cparison between her and Smarty Pants, but that's an interesting way of looking at it.:twilightsmile:

And it's more of "undeath as a meatpuppet" in their case, but sane basic statement applies.:twilightsmile: And Eeyup, Twilight has Scootaloo to help her - whether she wants the filly's help or not.:pinkiecrazy::scootangel:

This is really good!

Aaaaand this story is why fimfiction needs a "horror" tag

2563312 Thanks! :pinkiehappy:
2563535 I guess they just consider "Dark" to include horror. :twilightsmile:

Woot you actually continued like ya planned. grats on the awesome new chapter. I hope to see more soon.:twilightsmile: I wonder if Twi'll actually find a way to beat the bloody hooves.

2566622 Thanks!:twilightsmile: Hoping to get more on the ball about fic updates. :twilightsmile:

Yes, very scary. :fluttershbad:
I think I'm done for scary stories for the year.

2688861 The Bloody Hooves work really fast.:pinkiecrazy:

And wow, that picture is relevant even though it wasn't made for the fic.:twilightoops:

2797713 Hopefully I'll get that next PoH chapter up soon.:twilightsmile: And hopefully this sometime.:scootangel:

Aww, fuck. Really!? Scootaloo is one of them? Shit...;_; That explains the creepy picture...

Ahh. Found a video about this fanfic. Pretty close to the actual fanfic! :raritywink:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iqPqucRREZg

2798869 Originally the pic was just of Twilight, since the fic was initially just a one-shot and Scoots being one of them was meant to be the surprise reveal at the end. However, since it's now multi-chaptered and Scootaloo is a main character, I edited the pic to include her.:twilightsmile:
2801108 That seems pretty close, just give her more of a patchwork look.:scootangel:
2814883 Actually, I wouldn't say it's about the fanfic at all, considering the title and description don't mention the fic at all, and it's about Rarity and not Twilight, but it does have similarities.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tCJHkJHLtj0
I was watching MasterMax888 play mlp games until I realized that in this video, (he already points out it has a Cupcakes reference) that there is a Blooded Hooves reference in this game, hence Luna in the game talking about the Bloody Hooves trying to get her .etc

2844446 Nah, that wasn't a reference to this fanfic - it would be more accurate to say the reverse, actually. The Blank Flank ending of Super Filly Adventure helped inspire this story, as stated in the description.:scootangel:

2844745
Ahh! That's actually pretty cool! ^_^ Nice to know!

i.imgur.com/U0iGXNu.jpg
Finally got up to doing a little Blooded Hooves Twilight fan-art...
It's not too good, just minor photoshop skills on a picture of Twilight Sparkle, but it's what I can do and I couldn't think of too much detail.

2943319 Oooh, that's a pretty good picture-edit!: I like it!:pinkiehappy:

Unlike her assistant, Twilight was from tired.

Correction: Unlike her assistant, Twilight was far from tired.

3076840>>3076865 Heh, thanks for the corrections!:rainbowlaugh::twilightblush:

3076967 It's what I do. :)

3077042 It often seems cases like that happen - you can look over someone else's work to preread and find every error, then you look over your own and more often than not miss one or two.:twilightblush:

3077082 Yeah I know that.
I've done that.
And i'm lazy, so I have no desire of changing it :P

awh yus. 1,000th view.

Can you m8ke the titles links, rather than quoted sets of words?

Looks like this story is as dead as it's main character.:rainbowlaugh:

Now to head to sleep, odds are I'll sleep well, given that nightmares don't seem to wake me up.

4247353 It's not dead, I just went on hiatus for a while:scootangel:

Comment posted by Pitch Bend deleted Jul 11th, 2014
Comment posted by Pitch Bend deleted Jul 11th, 2014

Great story, but dead

When will new chapters going to be added?

7997340
Dead bud, ironic for this story really.

8742716
I don't know, he did log back on a couple of weeks ago.

I have not given up! I really hope this story is finished!

I still haven't given up.

I'm not giving up on this story! Although a response would be nice.

9511615 I'm actually trying to update my stories, so hopefully sometime within the week!

9511654
Awesome! Also, thank you for responding!

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