Undead Raiser

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Chowder

Chowder #1 · Jul 6th, 2018 · · · The Undead Anti Hero (GRAMMAR FIXED) ·

I like the apocalyptic theme in it

Reizthefakebrony

Reizthefakebrony #2 · Jul 6th, 2018 · · · The Undead Anti Hero (GRAMMAR FIXED) ·

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Now that I'm thinking about... Is has the apocalyptic stuff, except that I had to see if Canterlot is still intact or not. Also, the main character turning zombies into his minions?.... That rocks.

Right now I'm thinking about to put some pre-chapters before the actual ones to bring out the main character's background story while also revamping the story and making the description of the story more coherent with that.

Also, the story is tied with a very obscure PSP game, which name isn't available on the series tag so I have to make my own.

Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #3 · Sep 10th, 2018 · · · Brutal Ascension (GRAMMAR FIXED) ·

If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like? Wait, he? The pony in the cover art is clearly a mare.

Reizthefakebrony

Reizthefakebrony #4 · Sep 11th, 2018 · · · Brutal Ascension (GRAMMAR FIXED) ·

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That wasn't intentional. He is in fact a stallion but it came out like this when I have made that. I tried to make use of the negative space and that was the result.

fanreader999999

fanreader999999 #5 · Oct 12th, 2018 · · · Cloudsdale Infestation (GRAMMAR FIXED) ·

Zzz

Reizthefakebrony

Reizthefakebrony #6 · Oct 12th, 2018 · · · Cloudsdale Infestation (GRAMMAR FIXED) ·

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Finally, is about time I see a critic so eloquent like this.

I guess that cannot be avoided, or the pacing of the chapter you had read was badly regulated or you had assumed that the story is simply boring.

You see, I had initially wrote this story as a warm up zombie one, which is also a crossover with a obscure PSP Game existing, just to see if the story and the way I had wrote it worked. Surprisingly, a few people like with only two dislike... But I don't think is this good as I almost thought it is. So thanks for that feedback, because I wasn't really something this great from this.

Divan1229