• Member Since 26th Jul, 2021
  • offline last seen 18 minutes ago

Pillowfight


Call me Cheese Sandwich, cause I'm here to make you laugh!

Comments ( 4 )

“Of course you’d have a dick potion,” Maud muttered to herself.

“But... THAT’S INCEST!”

Okay. I probably shouldn't give a like and comment to a rival contest story but I like this.

Maud leaned forward and read a few of the stickers Pinkie had applied to her wheel. “Some of these activities are a bit risqué.”
Pinkie looked over the wheel with a dubious expression. “Naw, not really!” she concluded. “I’ve actually toned it down quite a bit from our usual—whoa there, I see what you mean!” With a double take, Pinkie blushed, reached for the wheel, and peeled off a sticker with the shameful label HOLD HOOVES. “Geeze, sorry you had to see that one, Maud,”

how dare

This was porn, through and through. It was funny, it was weird, and it was pink. I died at the lightning round, and my one correction was going to be "Shouldn't it be 'Our' sisters?" But you addressed this.

You addressed this hard.

Thanks! This left me chuckling.

When reading this, I felt a flurry of emotions coming towards me. It's just like a rat in a maze of slightly spoiled swiss cheese, but every time I come close to a hole to look around I get splashed with a rock-candy flavoured cream pie, and it was just like how Garfield started his Mondays, which made me laugh like organ movie Andrew Garfield.

Wait, where was I? Oh yeah, the story is really funny and everyone's personalities and the overall environment makes a considerable amount of sense. But after that it also made me think about a couple of things, like how did Pinkie manage stuff without harming the fetus, how money doesn't come easy, how much responsibility is too much and how does the Pie family get around after being so insatiable, etcetera.
Onwards!

Login or register to comment