New canon is gonna screw this story over in a few weeks time if Trxie does actually return in the Magic Duel. Ah whatever, still more close to canon than Romance Reports.
Beautiful. Just absolutely beautiful. Descriptions of emotion is truly one of your strengths I think. It was the same as A Bluebird's Song, and it's the same here. Keep up the wonderful work.
This is turning into one of my top favorite stories. The characters have real depth to them, and the details are perfectly done. Overall, you win five of five stars from me!
Though a part of me almost wishes I had waited until the story was completed, cause I want MOAR!
Trixie and Fluttershy really need each other at the moment. I can hardly wait for Fluttershy's talk with Twilight. I am really looking forward to the next chapter. Hell, I'm looking forward to the rest of this story.
1579319 Well, this is the second Trixie and Fluttershy story I've read, the first being Kindness' Reward, of course, and I never really found any better ones after that.
Great chapter - full of warmth and kindness! So glad that Trixie and Shy managed to talk about everything (with the rare exeption of the fires of longing burning in Trixie's heart), emphasizing their similarities and common traits to share. Still, there's something wrong about me, reading this chapter. In fact, you've made me think like and feel like Trixie: part of me is thoroughly delighted with the talks, friendly hugs of appreciation and support, with the slow pacing of their relationship. But there's a Mr. Hyde inside me screaming and pleading for a depiction of a single kiss, a caress, shattering the boundaries of a friend zone THIS-BUCKING-INSTANT (oh, shuddup, Hyde)! But... oh, snap, isn't that exactly what you've planned? Make an audience want to see our mares fall in love with each other and go for a full-scale romantic affair, but at the same time make us just enjoy the pacing of a story, even being afraid that a hurry could just bring everything down? As for me, I've never felt myself like Trixie, and now I'm walking in her horseshoes. It's almost like first-person narration right now - even with you not using it directly. Thumbs up for a new way of integrating a reader into the narration!
This chapter is great. It's amazing how you were able to tie in Fluttershy's inability to fly with Trixie and her own problems. Such a great characterization for Trixie. At the rate this story is going, it might top Kindness' Reward for being my favorite Trixieshy Fic.
ever since Bluebird's Song, you just keep getting better and better. Nice job
Thank you, Ardensfax. This is just the story I needed to see today. Shit day, long story short, but this is just the story I wanted to see.
New canon is gonna screw this story over in a few weeks time if Trxie does actually return in the Magic Duel.
Ah whatever, still more close to canon than Romance Reports.
And now that I read it, I feel a lot better.
Beautiful. Just absolutely beautiful. Descriptions of emotion is truly one of your strengths I think. It was the same as A Bluebird's Song, and it's the same here. Keep up the wonderful work.
1579235 Yeah, this is probably going to get slapped with an Alt-Universe tag when that all goes down.
1579278 Glad to have cheered you up! Thanks for the encouragement, it's good to know people are enjoying it.
This is turning into one of my top favorite stories. The characters have real depth to them, and the details are perfectly done. Overall, you win five of five stars from me!
Though a part of me almost wishes I had waited until the story was completed, cause I want MOAR!
Trixie and Fluttershy really need each other at the moment. I can hardly wait for Fluttershy's talk with Twilight. I am really looking forward to the next chapter. Hell, I'm looking forward to the rest of this story.
1579319 Well, this is the second Trixie and Fluttershy story I've read, the first being Kindness' Reward, of course, and I never really found any better ones after that.
Great chapter - full of warmth and kindness! So glad that Trixie and Shy managed to talk about everything (with the rare exeption of the fires of longing burning in Trixie's heart), emphasizing their similarities and common traits to share.
Still, there's something wrong about me, reading this chapter. In fact, you've made me think like and feel like Trixie: part of me is thoroughly delighted with the talks, friendly hugs of appreciation and support, with the slow pacing of their relationship. But there's a Mr. Hyde inside me screaming and pleading for a depiction of a single kiss, a caress, shattering the boundaries of a friend zone THIS-BUCKING-INSTANT (oh, shuddup, Hyde)!
But... oh, snap, isn't that exactly what you've planned? Make an audience want to see our mares fall in love with each other and go for a full-scale romantic affair, but at the same time make us just enjoy the pacing of a story, even being afraid that a hurry could just bring everything down? As for me, I've never felt myself like Trixie, and now I'm walking in her horseshoes. It's almost like first-person narration right now - even with you not using it directly. Thumbs up for a new way of integrating a reader into the narration!
Astounding chapter, I quite liked it.
Not going to speculate, considering the last time I did so I was quite wrong and, moreover, wrong over way too many words.
So I'll just say 'good job, and looking forward to more just as good' and be on my way.
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This chapter is great. It's amazing how you were able to tie in Fluttershy's inability to fly with Trixie and her own problems. Such a great characterization for Trixie. At the rate this story is going, it might top Kindness' Reward for being my favorite Trixieshy Fic.
ever since Bluebird's Song, you just keep getting better and better. Nice job
well dis gunna b gud
I don't know how Shy actually managed it, but I picture her Staring down a manticore and forcing it to carry Trixie back to the cottage.
We have the technology. We just need Twilight to ask the Princesses for a six million bit loan.
I bet everything that is happening turns out to be a figment of Trixies imagination