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JasonTheHuman

Joined December 2011
2,615 followers

I type stories using my hands

Stories (6)

  • The Haunting in Ponyville
    Lyra and Bon-Bon live in a haunted house

    18,099 words · 9,981 views · 1,104 likes · 15 dislikes
  • Moonlight
    "Everypony has fears, Scootaloo. Everypony must face them in their own way."
    115,776 words · 4,447 views · 521 likes · 5 dislikes
  • Anthropology
    Lyra is determined to find out the truth behind the mysterious legends of humans.
    130,415 words · 105,752 views · 6,587 likes · 139 dislikes
  • Caretakers
    Lyra and Bon-Bon have taken on a bit more than they can handle...
    5,027 words · 5,024 views · 304 likes · 3 dislikes
  • A Season of Giving
    7,195 words · 5,298 views · 683 likes · 15 dislikes
  • Truth vs. Fiction
    1,074 words · 14,528 views · 828 likes · 33 dislikes

Blog Posts (47)


There's something strange and unnatural living in Bon-Bon's house.

Something other than Lyra.

First Published
4th Oct 2012
Last Modified
31st Oct 2012

Comments ( 398 )

#1 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · 4 · 1 ·

I was hoping Anthropology sequel.

#2 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

Inb4 featured.

#3 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · 2 · ·

It's a Lyra and Bon-Bon story. I'm happy with that.

#4 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

Holy buck a new story by JasonTheHuman!

*drops everything, reads immediately*

#5 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

>JasonTheHuman posts a new story.

>Instant Fave after reading.

#6 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

A new a JasonTheHuman Lyra fic? I'm in!

EDIT: Well, Bon-Bon fic. But still!

#7 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

Oh, goody! Just in time for Halloween! Nightmare Night! :pinkiehappy:

#8 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

I love your description :yay:

#9 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

Something other than Lyra.

LOL

#10 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

Looks fun so far!

#11 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

Lyra's reaction... it is the same as mine to this story!  And new episodes of Red Dwarf as well? Could this day get any better!?! No, I think not. It has achieved maximum amounts of awesome possible! :pinkiehappy: :rainbowdetermined2: :raritystarry:

#12 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

Well Jason,  Its pretty good, I like how you still kept lyra's personality from anthropology. Since this is a darkish fic I will be paying close attention. Do not let me down.

>>1387591 no first?

Azu
#13 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

Whats this?! Something new by JasonTheHuman? With Lyra and Bon Bon?

Instant like and fav! :rainbowdetermined2:

#14 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

Oh Lyra

#15 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

>Haunted by a ghost.

>Best Nightmare Night ever.

LOGIC!!!

#16 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

One of my hands [img]//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png[/img] is covered in butter so I can' accurately praise this, I am sorry.  [img]//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_cry.png[/img] But don't fret for I will follow this! [img]//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png[/img]

#17 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

>>1387676 I disagree. I just got Jin-Roh: The Wolf Brigade on DVD. I've surpassed your awesome levels by approximately 41.9347 percent.

#18 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

>>1387722

I have no idea what that is, therefore it doesn't count. My point stands. Good day sir! :trollestia:

#19 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

>>1387749 Anime. And I think I still win, because I'm currently listening to The Eagles, and nothing is better than them ever.

#20 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

Suspenseful. I like it  

#21 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

Halloween enters JasonTheHuman makes horror fic with Lyra and Bon bon

(its because of Halloween right?)

THIS HALLOWEEN WILL BE GLORIOUS!:yay:

#22 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 22h ago · · ·

>>1387682 I'm not that kind of guy.

Cynewulf
Story Approver
#23 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

Looks pretty promising! :twilightsmile:

#24 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

I favourited this as soon as I saw the description.

#25 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

>>1387591 same here  but any story with lyra and bon bon is a good story

#26 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

Faved and liked before i even read it, because i know that dis gon be gud. :pinkiehappy:

#27 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

I don't really have much to add here... I mostly just feel compelled to do an 'inb4 featured' comment.

I'll have to give the first chapter another look later, when I've got the time to read it... well, properly, I guess. For now I'll just stick with the standard "I like the story, keep doing what you're doing" thing. Oh, and just pretend that I threw in some generic MOAR picture.

Good work, etc... and this reminds me that I still need to drag myself around to reading the second half of Anthropology. :ajbemused:

#28 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

Anthropology's author puts out a story. Insta-fav without even reading it, like a boss.

#29 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

Alright!  I'm glad to be seeing more of your work Jason, you were inactive for a while and I was getting worried that Anthropology had been your one hit wonder.  

So far, this fic is pretty damn good!  I like how Bon-Bon is ripped from her comfort zone, and into Lyra's!  I've also noticed that you have added a lot more detail in your descriptions of settings and actions than in your previous fics.  I hope you can keep this one alive and fed, and a word of advice, don't set chapter dates.  Don't rush yourself in getting the chapters out, take your time, and give love to the chapters you do complete.  

Try to use some more complex sentence structures, and show us the emotions of the characters when they're talking.  I noticed a lit in your

past fics, that a lot of the time, the it would be:

"That would be great!" Lyra said.  

Try doing this: "That would be great!"  Lyra said, her posture relaxing with relief.  

One example from the story is when Lyra says she heard something:

Lyra's ears perked up. "Wait. Did you hear that?" She glanced behind her into Bon-Bon's room.

"Hear what?" Bon-Bon said.

"Listen."

This could be changed by adding details like:

Lyra's ears perked up, and her head cocked slightly.  "Wait.  Did you hear that?"  She glanced behind her into Bon-Bon's room.

"Hear what?" Bon-Bon asked, her annoyance towards her tennant showing.

Lyra put a hoof to her lips. "Listen."  She whispered, her head lowering slightly in an effort to hear the unknown sound.

It really fleshes the characters out more, and gives us a clear picture of what the they're doing.  I hope this fic turns out as good and as well recieved as Anthropology, I know you got a like and a fave from me!

#30 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

Oh Lyra... didn't you learn anything from Paranormal Activity?

The one who thinks the haunting is cool and makes light of it *always* gets it in the end.  :pinkiesad2:

#31 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

Great to have you back :pinkiehappy: :twilightsmile:

#32 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

The Haunting - Testament

#33 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

>>1387964 Well buck, I guess that means I would die then. I can never keep a straight face in serious situations like this.

#34 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

There's something strange and unnatural living in Bon-Bon's house.

Something other than Lyra.

For that opening alone you get a favorite and a thumbs up.  :)  The story being good will just be gravy beyond that.  :rainbowkiss:

#35 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 21h ago · · ·

seems kind of like 'a ghost story,' but from Lyra and Bon-Bon's point of view.

#36 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 20h ago · · ·

>>1387682

No. No first. "First!" comments are for attention whores.

Anyways, like it so far.

#37 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 20h ago · · ·

Separate rooms?  Disappointing...:applejackunsure:

Otherwise, I'm looking forward to more.

#38 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 20h ago · · ·

This reminds me of A Ghost Story I once read...

But I can't wait to see what happens! *kicks feet in excitement* Jason, it's good to see ya back.

#39 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 20h ago · · ·

>>1387964

Should it be ponynormal activity...…:rainbowlaugh:

#40 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 20h ago · · ·

Oh Lyra you silly filly  :facehoof:

#42 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 19h ago · · ·

I want some more, so I'll Fav and Watch You

#43 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 19h ago · · ·

>>1388237

Damnit, someone beat me to referencing it.

Mine was going to be "Is it Spooky? o.o"

#44 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 19h ago · · ·

For some reason I was listening to the dead space theme while reading th:pinkiecrazy:is. Need MOAR.

#45 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 18h ago · · ·

>>1388359

Nah, it feels more like the old poltergeist movie, because so far nothing overtly aggressive has happened, just mischievous.

For some reason, I get the feeling that's going to change.

#46 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 18h ago · · ·

Getting a poltergeist feel just like most everyone here. All that's needed now are chairs stacked on the table and it'll be complete. Only THEN would I want to see their house implore on itself! But I'm getting ahead of myself. It's good to have you writing again Jason. Anthropology was and still is one of my favorite fics. Looking forward to what's in store for this one.

#47 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 17h ago · · ·

i read this purely based on zee description. i cant say im disappointed.

#49 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 17h ago · · ·

Intriguing! I like this! More...

#50 · Chapter 1 · 95w, 16h ago · · ·

A perfect ghost story to get into the Halloween spirit! This is great! :pinkiehappy:

Silver out!

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