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Dr.Lovestrange


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Long ago, Dash and Gilda had a bet. This is the story of how that bet came about, and then lengths to which Dash will (not?) go to beat her old friend. There will be silliness, and shipping is guaranteed.

A word or two of explanation: This fic is a collaborative effort between the author and her lady, AveryStrange. The first chapter was written jointly, and then we split and took the story in very different directions! Choose your own adventure.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 7 )

Hmmm I was hoping for more Gilda.

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Do you think I should remove the Gilda tag? It really is more Rainbow Pie centric.

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Well I would like to read what Gilda did to win her side of the bet.

Huh, well this is a different start than the usual stories, but it keeps cannon well enough though. I am pretty sure that the argument is over a difference in anatomies, but seeing as griffons possess beaks i doubt they suckle their young. Really this brings me more to a confusion to specifics about fantasy creatures anatomy than the play one in the story. Though i am interested to see how this can be played out, dares among brash individuals are often humorous things to observe.

This ending was clearly the better despite its much shorter length. The other ending was soured by the finish, i don't mind putting ponies into roles for the sake of a story so long as they don't contradict cannon, but that was to much of a jump for me to take after the build-up leading to what i was sure would be a cute ending.
Thanks for a branched story, cant help but feel more could have been done with the original idea though.

Wow, wildlife must really hate R.D.

I agree there should be a side with Gilda failing and one with her accomplishing . Since we had dash fail one and accomplish one

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