Nero Darkard
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Woona....dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_sad.png
Celly.....You bitch, you made Woona sad!
Hhheeeelllll yyyeeeaaahhh!!!
Celly... You unselfish inconsiderate piece of benevolent tyrant you!
The Prequel has arrived!!
Don't be sad Luna. We still love you. 
Wow Celestia, you are such a jerk.
I'm sure nothing bad could possibly happen next ... Great work, Its a good build up to what we know is going to be good, and the way you find ways to make things so complex, yet so fitting to the mlp universe - I look forward to seeing the sisters resent each other more and more
Oh dear, the inevitable horrors are starting to slowly unfold!
I hope your happy Celestia. 
Love how you used the picture.
Let's see what horrors your sick and twisted mind can make for that image.
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Thanks. Glad you noticed it.
Several of my pre-readers didn't.
Anyway, it is kinda sad this story, so far, gets very little attention.
I hope this changes when the chapters proceed.
love it, i like the idea of creating a pony with arcane magic, and it going horribly wrong, this was well worth the read. lunas depression is just wow - amazing
Genius*
Other then that, great work!
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Fixed it. Thanks for pointing it out.
Well, stuff like that happens when you lose contact with your pre-readers and all of them suddenly abandon doing their job even though they volunteered to it just recently before.
1562781 mmm yes.
Uh oh, this can't be good!
Knock on wood.
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A question, though.
What do you think of Celestia, now that I showed her perspective on things?
1579190 Well, I'm not exactly her biggest fan in this story. I still think she's a jerk for neglecting Luna for all these years. Celestia, I know you get tired after a long day, I can understand that; but would it kill you to spend at least an hour with your younger sister over some tea or something?
I can probably give her a short lecture on how to be a better sibling, but I digress. I'm really enjoying the story and I can't wait for the next chapter! 
Sweet merciful Faust.
Hide me.
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JESUS CHRIST HOW HORRIFYING!
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>> Referring to Picture.
*rubs his hooves together giddy in anticipation for the next part* lets see what horrors our dear Luna will bring to her land~
I imagined the entire scene with Luna/Nightmare moon having that possessed smile...
I need a hug.
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1562781 Hey, don't get mad, I got better and i'm back doing my job!
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Do you realize you are using the same emoticons over and over again?
Just asking out of curiousity
1724589 Yeah, I do. I keep forgetting that I'm using them so many blasted times since there's not a "scared" emoticon.
Ah the birth of Slendermane, the first demon.
ah i finely got round to finishing this chapter, so now we know, ultimately that its all emerald dreams fault, if she just knew her princess' better then we would all be fine XD
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Well if you insist on seeing it this way, she already got her punishment.
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and nightmare moon is born, but somethings a little wrong in my mind toward the end of this chapter, I'm reading it as though the narrator of the story has gone just as insane as the character, especially with "She really did not see that coming." still just my opinion.
*sees red darkness getting closer to Everfree*
*notice reapers are invincible*
*starts writing Last Will*
XCOM - De manis Unknown
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I dont get it...
Just a minor correction:
>>“No! It is not! By all means, Luna. Your selfishness is bothering on ignorance!”
Shouldn't it be?
>>“No! It is not! By all means, Luna. Your selfishness is bordering on ignorance!”
Loving the story so far
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Glad you like it, but in all honesty, I can not see the difference.
Could you maybe highlight the change?
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Oh sorry my bad
>>“No! It is not! By all means, Luna. Your selfishness is
botheringon ignorance!”>>“No! It is not! By all means, Luna. Your selfishness is bordering on ignorance!”
The use of bothering here is incorrect as it means to irritatie/disturb/intrude etc. Whereas bordering refers to something being adjacent to something else, hence the expression: "Bordering on something".
Hope that clears it up
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Yes it is. Thanks for pointing it out.
Hope to see more comments of you on later chapters!
This sounds like the epic title sequence of an equally epic story.
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Yet the story is not over.
We will have a bit more to cover before we reach MI.
That was friggin' epic!!
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To make the experience perfect, listen to this song:
Edit:
http://iambrony.jsmart.web.id/mlp/gif/16766__safe_pinkie-pie_rarity_animated_putting-your-hoof-down.gif?1342433299 (<--Overreaction)
Hint hint, Celestia.
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I dont know why but it seems like everything i write is shocking you.
Do you plan on using the Pie family in this fic?
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I suppose you best find out by reading the next chapter, which I just happened to publish seconds before reading your comment.
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That's what I call convenient.
The walking dead...
Better get my zombie repellent!
Again, hint hint Celestia.
Lindy Pie? Oh dear, I have a bad feeling about this.
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Congratulations.
That comment legitly made me laugh.