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Not gonna lie, Rainbow Dash is my least favourite member of the Mane 6 so I was hoping for a little sadder ending. Not the worst case scenario, but still something.
Nevertheless, a good one shot. Good interpretation of Scootaloo's angst about not being able to fly. Also, you jumped on the orphan Scootaloo bandwagon, but at the same time you didn't. You just killed off her canon parents. Think outside the box, am I right?
Nice work.
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Tbh, Rainbow is my least favorite too lol. I can't stand her half the time. Other half, she aight.
This is a Scoots fic and so I really wanted to show that it doesn't matter she can't fly. She's great anyway and should be happy with what she has.
Yeah I don't like that her parents weren"t dead in canon. That hurt her character severely in my eyes so I killed them off here.
Thanks for the read and the comment!
I think Dash can be great in fanfiction if handled correctly. In show she comes off immature sometimes iirc, but there is certainly a depth to the character, a constant personal struggle to uphold some values. None other of mane 6 have it pronounced like that I think, except Twilight
Good story
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Agreed 100% Lost and Found Dash is amazing. That tends to be the case. FF generally destroy canon characters imo.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
oof, and if Scootaloo didn’t have a complex about that before… :(
yeah, that is a good summary of Scootaloo’s unfortunate life so far
aww that is so Rainbow Dash
so true, your life has been a glorious story, Scoots!
so true. love Scootaloo coming to better terms with her wings when she’s older
aww!
aww, so true!
great Scootaloo coming to terms with her life’s unfairness story, with the full circle of the role reversal between her and Rainbow Dash, and her parents’ deaths reflecting their absence from her youth. thanks for writing!
Maybe it’s just because I’ve been around as long as I have, but “Scootaloo can’t fly” drama is too well-worn a path for me to really enjoy. Kudos for not taking the easy way out and miraculously giving her wings full functionality mid-plummet, but the story doesn’t do anything to stand out. It’s serviceable (which, to be fair, is more than I can say for some other entries.) Thank you for it.
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https://youtu.be/7j1T0Dpi0to?si=fn6pDLvgmcRQr657
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https://youtu.be/lhckuhUxcgA?si=QAgRtuM45ggeo2kt
Good story, author. One of the few (nay, less than handful) stories that I truly enjoyed from your collection.
God bless!
-Davidtin
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Well, thank ya kindly.