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My name Is Pinkamena Diane Pie, but of course you already know that. I want to know why you did this to me, why you all made my life a living hell, why must I be the one to live a life full of torment!?

*Author's notes*

This can be seen as a little experiment, I have no idea if this a good idea to be honest... But I decided to write it none the less. I also want to thank a friend of mine Aroy for all the help he give me,even though this is super short this was actually the hardest thing I've ever wrote, I'm not exactly sure why either. So thanks for helping me write this and readers... I hope this makes you think!

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This was actually quite a nice little read. Have a moustache. :moustache:

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Thank you, I was unsure about this story. The idea for it came to me randomly when I was trying to sleep, I was thinking about how as humans we do love a bit of chaos, we've proved that time and time again. How far could we go? Well... We turned a lovable, happy mare into a sadistic killer, but did she choose that life? No we turned her into a monster. Sooo yeah ta da! That's how this random piece of work was made.

To be frank, your username drove me here. I'm a sucker for the crazy elements of literature. :pinkiecrazy: I will say this was very well done, and may I ask. Do you plan to do more of this style writing? You know, the crazy, twisted, demented style? If so, then you'll have one happy watcher. Regardless, I'm going to hit those uprate, fave, and watch buttons for this one. :ajsmug:

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Well I must say you're in for quite a treat! I do plan to make more psychological stories, in fact my other one "Two Sides of The Same Coin" is currently my on going psychological fic. If you enjoyed this then you might enjoy that and thank you for that watch. :twilightsmile:
I'm currently writing a big story that isn't really psychological, but I promise you I shall be writing more in the future! I hope you enjoy them.

1363618 YAY! :pinkiehappy: I'll have to make sure and add that to my read later list. For now I'm working on my stuff for the hour being. I'll read it and leave a comment once I've done so. :raritywink:

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Thank you very much. :twilightsmile:

:trollestia: Best. Story. Name. Ever:pinkiegasp:

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Somewhere in chaos we all find ourselves.
This destruction is the only tale we tell.
White is black and black is white.
Right is wrong and wrong is right.
Nothing ever fills this hole inside your heart.

Lyrics from "All Hail Shadow", it just seems fitting to me.

Yeah, I do think that it was about time someone put these words into Pinkamena's mouth. I can only say that there are some people out there who are either sick in the head or just have deep, profound issues that force them to place their own darkness into joyful worlds. Is it that they cannot accept the existence of joy and happiness? Or is it that their own lives are so free of happiness that they must find some way to destroy-by-proxy someone else's happiness?

Either way, just remember that Pinkie Pie is Pinkamena Diane Pie. They are not different personalities, they are the same pony, one who is capable of sadness and whose sadness has a physical manifestation. There is not 'dark half' hiding under the surface.

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Pinkamena, I'm not scared of you.. You just need to calm down. Believe in yourself, 'mena. You just need to think about a plan to make your life fun and happy! :pinkiehappy: Plus my favorite pony is Pinkamena, so don't think about that! Eveeeerypoooony loves you!



-From your #1 fan iSnivy^^

This is...the most truthful story I have ever read.

I find it a bit ridiculous that nearly EVERY SINGLE PINKAMENA STORY EVER portrays her as a sadistic killer. I mean, come on! Can't people be more original, like this person here?

This is very well done, I agree with everything Pinkamena said. Especially the Rainbow Dash thing. STEREOTYPICAL %@$*#!^) !

Hey! It's Shadowpaint (the one who did the reading of this story). Lemme know if you ever write a similar story and I'll do a reading of it as well. LOVE this story, and can't wait to see more!

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Will do, I'm glad you enjoyed this so much. :twilightsmile:

Hey everybody,

we did a live reading of this story and posted the recording here:

Hope you all enjoy, we certainly did :twilightsmile:

Love and tolerance,
TheLiving Library Player Socieety

Mena, ur my favorite !!!!!!! Don't feel bad :pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiecrazy::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::eeyup:

I'm not a fan of crazy or sadistic Pinkamena. I'm a fan of quiet, thoughtful, serious Pinkamena.

I consider Pinamena to be what's left when Pinkie comes to grips with her past and overcomes her fears. I think she can understand that she has her own worth, and doesn't need the approval of other ponies to have value. She doesn't require friends to be validated. I think one day, Pinkie will break down and need psychological help... she will hurt... then she will heal... and will be Pinkamena once again. Little Pinkamena who hid away in her own mind when Pinkie became dominant. Pinkie can't continue the charade forever. Pinkie is the problem. Pinkamena needs to find her strength and find her way back out.

What a horrible. hollow life Pinkie must lead. Quiet, thoughtful Pinkamena is still in there. Pinkie faces the world so she doesn't have to, but this can't last forever.

3689408 Hm... I agree... :raritywink:
Poor Pinkamena... :fluttercry:
I'm not much of a fan of the psychopath Pinkamena either. :fluttershbad:
Just quiet, thoughtful, introverted and serious Pinkamena and maybe even a little bitter, if not completely sad and depressed. :pinkiehappy:
I love dualities. I mean, they make me think and it's intriguing... and what if Pinkie Pie isn't truly happy, but a Stepford Smiler?
And also, I've noticed that Pinkie Pie is almost always ignored by her "friends" in some form or fashion. I wonder if she pretends not to notice it. :duck:
I touched upon it a bit in the story I'm currently writing, but not in the way that's completely devoted to it. I mean.... hn... :applejackunsure:
It'll get to it soon, in future chapters. :pinkiehappy:
But for now, it's stuck on Chapter Four... :ajsleepy:

This is a very nice story you wrote, Psicosis, and it really made me think... :pinkiehappy:
*faves this and follows you* :pinkiehappy:

Interesting. I like the idea, but it's missing something. I'm not sure what.

Nothing changed, though. This isn't a story as much as it's a journal entry. It's a great concept, but nothing more.

Oh my.... I never thought of it that way. Maybe we are cruel. I'm being open minded here but if somehow their world actually exists...I am sry pinkamena.

Hmm, hi.

I'm... i'm not sure if it's still on time, but I would like to ad my own grain of salt (or something like that, I'm not good with translations) to the matter.
Here:http://www.fimfiction.net/story/116550/the-doom-patrol
It's not the perfect world, and Pinkamena has not the main spotlight. But I hope it's good enough.

2312356 Hey I found you by accident :pinkiehappy:

I feel this way too, and the concept of them knowing they're just being used in whatever way we please has come to mind.
I'm an admin of a group called The Non-Evil Pinkamena which is dedicated to stories that treat Pinkamena fairly, or at least the ones that make sure she isn't sadist, psychotic or murderous.

I'm so glad to see others feel the same way. This story was really nice, and a good message. Really, though, this story feels more like a concept than an actual story, and it's actually an amazing concept; I wish there had been more done with it.

6046058 oh crud I guess I shouldn't expect you to. I don't know, you just stick out as one of the most prominent commentors on my story.

Sorry to bug you ^^;

6046087 Yeah that's what I meant by I shouldn't have expected you to recognize me ^^;

6047451 Hey don't think that way you shouldn't expect yourself to remember everything immediately. Besides, you saw my stories and then recognized me.

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