• Published 30th Sep 2012
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Transformers Prime: Magic of the Dinobots - Metroid Prime



The Autobots and Decepticons battle the ponies for Equestrias energon supply.

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The End

(play this for audio effect, you don't have to watch it)

Grimlock and Shockwave where on their bellies as the space bridge grew stronger.

"NO the portal!"

"The vortex is tearing the ship apart!"

The bots tried to get to their feet and hold on

Shockwave slipped a little,

"Why did I give myself a cannon for an arm!?"

The ponies however could not hold on.

"Why didn't Unicron give us hands!?" Twilight said

The crew of the Ark watched the event unfold before their eyes, all of them had a shocked faces.

Shining Armor tired to reach for his wife.

But the cage broke off and floated away.

"NNNNNOOOOOO!"

The gang could hold on any longer, their bodies flew off the hull of the ship.

And they all tumbled trough space and toward the vortex.

"Applejack!"

"Rarity!"

"Rainbow Dash!"

"GRIMLOCK!" Swop said


Both ships tumbled through space

The Driller began to spin and parts of the ship began to explode violently and many Deceptiocns where sucked out.

The two ships seemed to stop for a moment, then the accelerated through the portal just as it began to close.

And once they where both in, the space bridge closed in a flash off pure light.

And everything was silent.

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The ponies of Equestria watched as their rulers diapered through the portal, and they knew in ether hearts the their leaders where gone.

They where without a capital, without leaders, and most off all, they where lost.



Did the Autobots Deceptiocns and Ponies go straight to Cybertron? or did they bounce from one corner of the galaxy to another?

Only time will tell.

Til All Are One

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Thank you all for you support of this story and the comments, be inspiration is credited to JDPrime22 and TehAlphaGamer for their stories "Fall of Equestria and "Ridley in Ponyville for if it weren't for their great stories, none of this would have been here.

You guys are awesome!

Copyright to Hasbro Transformer and MLP:FIm


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Comments ( 13 )

2135171 well brawl is the most violent of all the combaticons

I can kinda see a sequel to this you know?

Good ending. :pinkiehappy:

Do you think you could make a new story that takes place after they get pulled through the portal?

2488010its already up its called magic of the predacons

2488293 ok thank you also I have an idea for a transformers crossover if you want.

Alright. That is the last straw! I'm reading the sequel immediately! NO ONE SHALL STOP ME!!!

6377202

...I need to fix that

let this be the end of the cybertronian wars as we bring peace through freedom as a new age dawns with friendship and family and freedom as everyone's right, TILL ALL ARE ONE.

7765524

This was my first story, I came here with no editor while being completely blind to the grammar mistakes and pacing, didn't help that I was high on transformers and tried jamming so many ideas into one story.


I look back and now I see how young and inexperienced I was, but I leave it like that as a reminder

7765556

I have no plans or intentions to got back an edit this, sorry if you want this to be more polished but I want to focus on my current stories than my past ones

I like the story but there are a few problems I noticed.
The inconsistancey of the Dinobots transformations, some of the dialouge doesn't quite fit with some characters, many typos, story continuity seems a tad all over the place, necessary parts of the story seem to be missing, other stuff in the story seems to come out of left, and it's a tad over dramatic with some of the ponies reactions(but that may be more accurate to the show, kinda a 50/50).

It's still a fun story though. I enjoyed reading it.

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