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Lusaminia


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Great chapter! Glad to see Bone Breaker introduced and learn more about her personality and backstory. Looking forward to seeing the qctipn in the next chapter.

Loving this its probably one of my favorite stories on this site please dont abandon it

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No plans to. Until it is done, One Last Mission has my complete and undivided attention.

This was a pretty entertaining chapter! I love the way you introduce Sharpshot and Willow Wisp. Both seem like pretty high energy characters and that alone makes them dynamic and unpredictable.

The way you start the chapter makes me think... Something is bound to happen later on where Bone Breaker's son is either going to do something stupid or get himself killed doing said stupid thing. Eitherway, I'm curious what he's up to while mom's not home.

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They indeed are. Helps them contrast from the more rigid and strict nature of Singing Rhapsody, and in rather different ways.

Oooo, we finally get to meet Willow Wisp and Sharpshot in this one. Willow Wisp is definitely somepony you don't want to get on their nerves. Very cool and bloodlust character though, they enjoy gore. Still, definitely a character I like. Sharpshot is clearly arrogant and full of himself. Defintely seems like a jerk at first but I'm sure nicer once you get to know him(hopefully). Great chapter as usual and glad to meet these new characters. Looking forward to the next one!

Great action chapter. I enjoy seeing how smug and arrogant yet cool, Sharpshot was. Also it's really neat seeing the weapon he used throughout the battle. Sharpshot definitely one of my favorite characters so far. I enjoyed reading this chapter looking forward to the next one!

An interesting idea, eager to read it when I get time.

Ever since an alt universe thought, i found such Stories very interesting

Great chapter! Glad to see more character development for Sharpshot and that he and Rhapsody are on better terms than before. It was also very brave of Rhapsody to reveal that much information to both Willow and Sharpshot but at least they seem trustful. Looking forward to the next one!

the start kinda reminded me of morning glory

its always hard to copy with such loses

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Purely coincidental. I do reference PH offhandedly, but I've never read it.

If anyone was an inspiration for Rhapsody's personality, it was Velvet Remedy.

Good start, lets see where it goes. :pinkiehappy:

Okay, "All Roads Lead Home" queued up for after this story. Thanks for the recommendation. :pinkiesmile:

Enjoyed learning about some more of Willows past even if it was dark and finding out more details about Sharpshots family. The cinema is definitely eerie though especially now meeting this new character, unsure if they might be ally or foe. Looking forward to the next chapter! ^-^

Caught up with this story, great so far, though I hope she finally meets at least one of her betrayers soon.

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Trust me, I didn’t expect it to take this long either. The good news is that we will quite soon be dealing with the traitors.

Fun fact: I was originally going to kill one in act 1. Only reason it didn’t happen was due to me feeling their survival gave a more concrete reason to head to San Palomino.

Nice chapter, the music scene was beautiful.

That was a fun chapter, finally getting some more answers. Looks like revenge is coming.

Huh. Rhapsody is somehow dead, at least kind of and Dead Hooves killed her, at least sort of. This will be interesting to see where the author goes with this. I'm still watching this story, it's good. :pinkiehappy:

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