Classified documents were stolen from the Enclave. One pegasus mare is sent to the surface to fix her mistake and ensure that information contained inside those documents don't compromise her home in the process.
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This was a pretty entertaining chapter! I love the way you introduce Sharpshot and Willow Wisp. Both seem like pretty high energy characters and that alone makes them dynamic and unpredictable.
The way you start the chapter makes me think... Something is bound to happen later on where Bone Breaker's son is either going to do something stupid or get himself killed doing said stupid thing. Eitherway, I'm curious what he's up to while mom's not home.
Oooo, we finally get to meet Willow Wisp and Sharpshot in this one. Willow Wisp is definitely somepony you don't want to get on their nerves. Very cool and bloodlust character though, they enjoy gore. Still, definitely a character I like. Sharpshot is clearly arrogant and full of himself. Defintely seems like a jerk at first but I'm sure nicer once you get to know him(hopefully). Great chapter as usual and glad to meet these new characters. Looking forward to the next one!