It is in very ancient times (around 5,000 years before the first Hearth's Warming Eve) and the ponies and draconequuses who once shared Equestria are now in a great war between Queen Faust with the Elements of Harmony and King Draconerus with the Elements of Chaos. The war just seems like endless bloodshed, but everything seems to change when two babies are born on the same day, Celestia and Discord. Are these two destined to be with each other or to be mortal enemies?
-Edited by BlazingBlade7
http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Blazinblade7
-The prologue is extremely rushed because it's not the actual story it's just trying to cram a whole bunch of background information in 4 paragraphs because to explain it all in great detail would take me about 20 paragraphs, but the ideas will be better explained throughout the story, so don't let the pace throw you off just read for the ideas.
-The picture was made by http://jennieoo.deviantart.com and her picture gave me the entire inspiration for this story
Please tell me if you find any spelling/grammar mistakes or any other critizim that could make the story better, Thank you!
God another DiscordxCelestia story. I WUB IT.
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I will keep a look-out bro.
Very first word in the story is a mistake.
"Are"
Frankly, that just puts me off very, very quickly. I suggest you either look over this before posting or find a beta-editor, having the very first word in your story be misspelled is not a good sign of things to come.
this is very Intriguing
...I'll come back to this later...
Very fascinating. :D
I have not read this, nor shall I read this, since I am working on something like this myself, but I wonder, since I started working on mine, about a month ago, why do I start to see more and more of these kind of stories... No offence intended or anything, I am just curious here. -Rarity
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Thanks I wasn't sure if it was too much, but I decided to keep it
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I have found somepony who will help edit this for me I really do hope that you change your mind about reading it. I still don't see why people don't read for the ideas and the story instead of the spelling and grammar. I found a story one time with awful grammar, but it was one the best stories that I have ever read.
This story is entertaining, but there are many run-on sentences that can make it difficult to read. I did enjoy it, but at some points I felt like just stopping.
im going to read this later
I think it's a great story but seems to go against the show some. Celestia said she defeated Discord. Not Faust deafeating Discord's dad. Other than that its a good story.
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That will be explained later in the story. This is a war before Discord's reign of terror.
I'm curious - what are the six Elements of Chaos?
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Deception, Aggression, Depression, Greed, Betrayal, and Witchcraft. It said in the story in parenthesis after it talked about the Elements of Chaos.
1345344 Okay, so they're opposites to harmony. I didn't read the story, just wanted to know how you did it.
Will the term ”Great Lord Shmuggwump” be used at all??? And very interesting beginning
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What?
1345344 Witchcraft should be Madness instead.
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I actually like that better, but instead of madness I'll use Insanity
It looks very enjoyable...
I will certainly read it later. Continue with the production! Or else I'll be sad.
Edit: Just read it, really nice! I want more now.
Sorry about this next chapter taking so long just really busy with school, but I'm going to make it good not just try to finish it.
Next chapter will be up no later than October 19, 2012
I am a liar!!!!
and spike with a mustache 
Ok so shortly after I posted that it would be done on the 19th my computer crashed and I lost everything. I had to go to some place to get my computer fixed and I lost the half of the chapter that I was done with. I have had my computer back for about three days now and I'm a little ahead of where I was at. I'll try to publish the chapter sometime night by being extremely productive in writing it for the rest of tonight. Sorry for the long wait and since you all are patient have some Pinkie Pie
Well at least there were no errors this time
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I realized that if I take my time and go through with a fine tooth and nail than I could edit it myself
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Thats a good virture in writing