After the Nexus Shattering and his brother Jason Thunder being thrown to some unknown universe, Zachary Pyromaniac travels to different universes to seek out the Shards and his brother. On his way to collect the second shard, Pyromaniac meets Zachary Dearest, an alternate version of himself from the Friday Night Funkin universe as well as the Dearest family who agree to help him. As the others try to find Jason, Zac goes to find the remaining shards. But one of the universes he goes to is not what he expects it to be...
(Note: This story is mostly from Zachary Pyromaniac's perspective.)
You might want to read this first.https://www.fimfiction.net/story/537504/arrival-of-a-phoenix
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what is the source for the coverart?
The Story did not really grab me yet. But the Intro is ok.
And your spelling is pretty good from what I saw. ^^
Still, best use something like Grammarly to check for some more.
Like: Tenses and Contractions
But I am not the best at it either soooo hope it still helps.
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It's from a Artist named Christos Karapanos
Source
Appreciate the feedback, I'll be more careful with spelling.
Finally, about time Phoenix's abilities worked. That's what happens when a phoenix From Another World enters another universe. It's time to adapt and change to the magic residue or the world's power source. Before they can use their abilities and Powers again, this will be their weakest state. Recovery depends on the stage and power of the Phoenix. This even includes the ranking of the Phoenix.
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That is the greatest explanation I've ever heard because I didn't actually have him any of his abilities. The original idea was he had to adapt to the universe cause of universal travel. But that is a much better explanation. Thank you for the feedback
What is this a crossover of?
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I guess friday night funkin?🤔
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You made this fanfiction and you don't even know what crossover it is?
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I mentioned friday night funkin in the description because another fan character of mine will come into play later on. It might be a while because I plan on adding him in during Equestria girls. Just to clear up any confusion
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Huh.
I got my knowledge of Phoenix from mythology and Marvel Comics with the Phoenix Force
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Noce👌 good stuff.
interesting story so far
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Appreciate the feedback, I'm trying as hard as I can to make this story lovable
love the story so far
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Appreciate it
All right, so before you put the plot crystals around the world first thing to do is create character Trust. Going to make sure everyone agrees with each other before something big happens.
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That's the plan, and Zachary Pyromaniac will try his dam hardest to do so and prove himself capable.
I am waiting for the sequel. I am very sure that this story have the potential to be popular and be featured.