When a human awakens in Eqeustia without any recollection of how they came to be there in the everfree forest, he must learn who he is and why he's here, all while becoming accustomed to a new world filled with magical talking ponies, as threats old and new loom on the horizon. What could possibly go wrong?
(Hey, so this is the first story I've done in a long time, just so you know, this story will take place sometime during Friendship is Magic season one at the begging and we'll see how far into the show we go with this. I hope you all enjoy reading this, kinda a dumb idea I've just had on my mind for the longest time, so now I'm posting it. Enjoy 
And I realize just how much I use the term "Memory" in the titles of my stories. Sorry, I suck at titles. :p)
(Story proofread by Cloudy Arrow)
seems interesting so far
10 feet? Damn that’s a big one.
Damn. Cliffhanger.
Seems like an interesting read so far. Keep it up man.
Interesting
I think it would be better if the story description was shorter and more concise
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possibly
This story can carry Fruition, don't stop now in this early age and you can make it something really good!
New Chapter, Woooooo! This chapter was awesome! It was interesting getting to learn about what Caleb could remember along with his first interaction with one of the Mane Six, I'm so excited for More!
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Luckily, I got my unorganized self more organized and I will be working on this every day, no matter how much or how little I write, progress will be made
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"He pants for a moment, catching his breath, placing a hand on his sweat-converted head."
That should be sweat covered
"Well, I'm pretty sure I've never seen anything like you either, ms...?"
Minor nitpick but I feel Miss would be better spelling
"Though deep down the booked worm unicorn was excited to see something so unfamiliar,"
Should be Bookworm
"despite not knowing the human for very long she still felt a tinge of worry for him"
"a smile knowing that she was about to learn some more stuff about the human in front of her."
You referred to Caleb as the creature except for these two instances where you referred to him as a human
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I may have taken a break but I'm back and I do plan on finishing this story
I like that you made them actually remember the Zecora incident compared to alot of other HIEs
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Yeah. In the first story I posted to this site, which was another hie story, the ponies weren't particularly nice to the human character I had. Even though they should have known better by then if I remember correctly, that story took place after Zecora was introduced, so realistically, they probably wouldn't have been that way to the human in that story after learning that lesson after the Zecora incident. I know a lot of stories like having humans be mistreated by ponies for being different but if you were to go by the canon of the show, it realistically wouldn't happen after a point in the canon.
Thank you for commenting
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I can see ponies being racist to the human before the Zecora incident in ponyville but not after.
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I imagine they would've reacted to Caleb the same way they did her, with hiding indoors and such. But yeah, after they learned that lesson, some would probably still be a little cautious, especially since nothing like Caleb has ever been seen by these ponies, but not as bad as they reacted to Zecora