Before Princess Celestia and Princess Luna ascended to the throne they had a brother who was a pegasus however unlike most pegasi, the Prince could perform magic. Many thought of this as a miracle and the pegasi would think of him as a hero. Unfortunately, the siblings father and ruler of Equestria, King Lunard II had different views about this supposed miracle. He felt threatened by his own son. So when the young Prince performed a trick that was believed to be impossible, he took matters into his own hoof...
Chapters (4)
This is very good. I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
This story has great potential, I love the premise.
I like it. Especially the corrupted evil Alicorn.
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Same
And now we wait to see the sisters reaction to this news
I can see the anger in Void in seeing the traitorous wizard who turned him to stone
Man this is good gg
Wow
I hope he doesn't have to see his father anymore!what will he think of the elements!
Am so ln love whit this story keep up the good work ✌️
Yikes... I'm a bit glad that Celestia and Luna knew their father was a heartless bastard. Also I fear that Lunard II may have unleash some attacks in secret to the other races of Equestria; Changelings, Centaurs, Sirens. You know; like the villains that attack Equestia might be revenge for what the ponies did as Celestia and Luna might have not known or Starswirl hid from them and the pillars?
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Agreed.
And oh boy would he have hated humans.
Especially America where we revolt against the crown and won. USA
That’s a bit concerning.
This new chapter is great, I like it! Hope to see more of your chapters and remember: Your talent determines what you can do. Your motivation determines how much you’re willing to do. Your attitude determines how well you do it.
You repeated and had her ask the same question twice and copied the same reaction from Daring twice.
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Well, f****** screw him. He won't last a "war" against us.
Damn... Ponies of that time were just plain heartless, more heartless then the villains of their modern time.
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Thanks for telling me I'll go and correct it now
They need to teach Void Streak how to rule a kingdom, or else he’s going to be another Tsar Nicholas II
Oh boy the nobles are going to go ballistic. Including blueballs.
*cracks a grin*
But oh it’s going to be good to see how hey react.
*sets up a chair and popcorn*
Hey anyone want to watch the show with me?
Offering popcorn
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Agreed
*distance sound playing America fuck yeah*
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Agreed.
But still fuck there father
So far so good on this new chapter, I enjoyed it. I'll be thrilled to see how Void will interact with Ms. Cheerilee along with the CMC. That is as long Diamond Tiara doesn't tease him about his ponish language.
I think this needs work.
What’s the status of the story?
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Temporary hiatus until I get a new laptop. This story is NOT dead.
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Do you have an estimate for when that might be?
(not trying to sound impatient)
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Well with the way the economies going I have no idea. And I don't blame you for getting impatient I'd probably be the same
Nice story