Well I think I will droped it here.

Being force fed huge amout of constant worldbuilding infodump that most don't care.

Not only that, the content is also not that good, worst than leaving them vague.

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yeah, thats what I was afraid of. I will say it was a lot worse, This chapter was at one point 10,000 words, so I'm glad I trimmed it down a lot. I will say that this was one of the harder chapters I've written since I was stuck on it for so long. not to mention I was hitting severe writer's block. I will chapters after this will be better.

I'll admit, I nearly dropped the story myself. But, I'm curious about how the Elementals will be handled, so I'll keep reading for now. I really don't think that this guy realizes that this dimension he's in probably works by different rules, and that the ponies control the weather and the sun and moon because they have to. It's never explained why in the show, but it's a common fan theory that Discord's reign screwed up the world so badly that the ponies had to manage the weather, animals, and the sun and moon, or else things would quickly devolve into catastrophe. The sun and moon in particular, Celestia and Luna are the only ones keeping those from freezing in their orbits, and either cooking or freezing the planet. As someone in another story described it, an effective nuclear deterrent, and one where they need to 'press the button' every day to prevent annihilation, instead of pressing the button to destroy a city. So, I can't see the Elementals condemning the ponies for breaking their laws when there was an extremely good reason for doing so. Break those laws, or everything on the planet dies. Everything.