Gallus and Silverstream have been dating awhile, so that makes finding just the right gift all that much harder. Because what do you get for that special some creature in your life that truly captures the way you feel?
Pre-read by: Short-Tale and Queen Chryssy
Editor: Dreams of Ponies
art source: artz
Written for Athlon2736 for Jinglemas 2022
Adorable story, Nai-Nai. I was happy to help. All the hugs
Such an adorably sweet story. I loved it and thought it so cute. <3
And then they spawned
gross
that's not romantic at all... Ewwwwww
It's what fish do....
We're not drinking the water either. . .
It's where they pee
cider for everypony!
They're so cute
Very smooth Gallus 🥰
I really like this one this was very cute story so Gallus and silverstream are ready for the holiday and I really do like the interaction between those two and how much they really care for each other and silver stream wants to introduce him to the family which that's pretty nervous meeting with the family especially royalty and despite all that he felt like anywhere she does he felt like everything is all right as long as she's with him again this was a pretty cute story and I love the shipping between them keep up the good work and Merry Christmas
Cute little story, good work.
A solid story that shows the anxiety of Hearth's Warming shopping can bring, while also introducing the immediate family into a somewhat fresh relationship. For Gallus, this was one experience, one that he wouldn't forget! Cool fic.
You heard me over Discord go through a few lines I liked, but just to mention them here:
Anxiety to the max here. I like how you addressed this in this section.
Wish the fic had more of this, very nonchalant way of protraying Gallus. That part in bold stood out so much because of how you wrote it.
Also want to mention I liked some of the world-building parts of this story. The Find the Pearl section, for instance, helped in portraying the kingdom to Gallus as more of a relaxed setting, although, he soon found out that royalty was a nerve-setter!