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Nailah


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Gallus and Silverstream have been dating awhile, so that makes finding just the right gift all that much harder. Because what do you get for that special some creature in your life that truly captures the way you feel?

Pre-read by: Short-Tale and Queen Chryssy

Editor: Dreams of Ponies

art source: artz

Written for Athlon2736 for Jinglemas 2022

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Comments ( 8 )

Adorable story, Nai-Nai. I was happy to help. All the hugs :pinkiehappy:

Such an adorably sweet story. I loved it and thought it so cute. <3

:twilightsmile: And then they spawned
:moustache: gross
:duck: that's not romantic at all... Ewwwwww
:facehoof: It's what fish do....
:moustache::raritywink: We're not drinking the water either. . .
:ajsmug: It's where they pee
:pinkiehappy: cider for everypony!
:twilightoops:
:yay: They're so cute
:eeyup:

“I’m glad you love it,” Gallus bawked, eyes blinking and then laughing. “Oh, Silverstream you are just so…” He paused, taking her in once more. The way her eyes sparkled with the warmth of her heart The way the water splashed behind her, and little sparkles of water would land about her body, making her shine and shimmer. “More beautiful than a diamond.”

Very smooth Gallus 🥰

I really like this one this was very cute story so Gallus and silverstream are ready for the holiday and I really do like the interaction between those two and how much they really care for each other and silver stream wants to introduce him to the family which that's pretty nervous meeting with the family especially royalty and despite all that he felt like anywhere she does he felt like everything is all right as long as she's with him again this was a pretty cute story and I love the shipping between them keep up the good work and Merry Christmas

Cute little story, good work.

A solid story that shows the anxiety of Hearth's Warming shopping can bring, while also introducing the immediate family into a somewhat fresh relationship. For Gallus, this was one experience, one that he wouldn't forget! Cool fic.

You heard me over Discord go through a few lines I liked, but just to mention them here:

At first, Gallus felt his heart sink. Did she not like it? Should he have been more specific, and gotten a more unique gift? Something that didn’t just work for everyone, but something Silverstream, in all that she is? His heart raced a mile a second, and over a hundred different scenarios went through his mind, in the span of a single moment.

Anxiety to the max here. I like how you addressed this in this section.

...he also moved his one arm above his head, predicting this sorta reaction from her.

Wish the fic had more of this, very nonchalant way of protraying Gallus. That part in bold stood out so much because of how you wrote it.

Also want to mention I liked some of the world-building parts of this story. The Find the Pearl section, for instance, helped in portraying the kingdom to Gallus as more of a relaxed setting, although, he soon found out that royalty was a nerve-setter!

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